the beginning arises curiosity. i have a lot of questions in mind. i want to keep reading. if i think more of it, it's gonna cost me some sleep tonight. i can't wait how the story will unfold!
Reviewed by May Yu (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2014
A very good reflection of a person when his soul has left him. Your story leaves open an opportunity for the soul to be reunited with this Hollow Man, as it has made its escape from the Hollow Man's body before being caught by the devil. Your closing remark on how glad the soul is that he's not himself means that the soul still knows what's between the good and the bad. Hopefully it will be reunited with the Hollow Man to make him whole once again. But aaahhhh!!.... probably not without a battle with the devil first.
Great beginning of a story with so much possibilities that can be further written into this.
An awakening of a soul seeing the life it chose to lead and what that life is like now because of evil choices. A sad write because the soul is to precious to just throw away for greed. Well done
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Kathy
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Great beginning of a story with so much possibilities that can be further written into this.
May
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Kathy