Savor every flying moment you’re alive –
The writing’s on the wall for all to read.
It’s not fallacy that just the strong survive.
So that luck smiles on chances you contrive,
Act yourself, but don’t just stand and plead.
Savor every flying moment you’re alive.
The outcome rests on just how hard you strive –
If your goal’s a harvest, plant the seed.
It’s not fallacy that just the strong survive.
Where flowers die, a weed may thrive –
And hope revives with a strong faith and creed.
Savor every flying moment you’ve alive.
Don’t covet anything achieved, till you arrive –
Many come to grief from their own greed.
It’s no fallacy that just the strong survive.
Success comes from a special kind of drive –
Avoid wars and strife, and you won’t bleed.
But savor every flying moment you’re alive –
It’s no fallacy that just the strong survive!
ahhh..yopu never disappoint Jim..
saved this one..ty!
vesna*
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2005
Very powerful write and message.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
Wise and Excellent Poetry Jim. This has got so much wisest advice and inspiration. Where flowers die a weed may thrive... Many come to grief from their own greed...
Superb in every single line every single thought. It's Absolutely Magnificent. I'm saving this one ok?
Thanks Jim What a Beautiful Inspiring truth filled poem. Thank You!
Tracey xoox (c :)
This outstanding Villanelle is etched on the door of the millennia.
"Savor Every Flying Moment You're Alive" glows its wise thoughts,
while ignites the dynamo of wisdom in the readers´hearts.
Thank You for enriching the history of Poetry, Poet!
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saved this one..ty!
vesna*
Superb in every single line every single thought. It's Absolutely Magnificent. I'm saving this one ok?
Thanks Jim What a Beautiful Inspiring truth filled poem. Thank You!
Tracey xoox (c :)
A salutary lesson is conveyed to us all here
Peter
Any day you wake up, breathing, above ground, is a great day to celebrate! :) Your words are beautifully inspiring--well done, Poet and friend!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Powerful message within it!!
Love Tinka
This outstanding Villanelle is etched on the door of the millennia.
"Savor Every Flying Moment You're Alive" glows its wise thoughts,
while ignites the dynamo of wisdom in the readers´hearts.
Thank You for enriching the history of Poetry, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Well done!
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