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Saturn's Pain
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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A mother's sorrow

 

A quiet evening putting away some things,
Then suddenly, the loudest noise,
Where was it coming from, what could it be!

I heard but couldn't see, what sounded
like brand new kittens.  That was hard
to believe.

 When I saw my Saturn, there were
three babes by her side.  She looked at me and
hissed, I said okay, I'm going away.

They made the loudest noise, what strong
lungs they had!  They must be very healthy,
of that I was very glad.

But their sounds were ones of sorrow, that's
all I can think.   I cried my eyes out the next day
 when one of them passed away.  Only two days old,
what went wrong?   He was much too young to sing
his swan song.

Sad to lose the one, but at least we had the other two.
Then another tragedy happened, one more was gone.
What was wrong, I didn't know what to do.

We still have one babe on the porch, his cries are loud,
Is this a normal thing, or does he miss his siblings too?

What is Mama feeling with all the pain she went through?
Is she just like a human Mama and feels the pain too?
I'm sure she must because, after all, cats are people too.

                                         Mary E. Lacey
                                                2011


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Reviewed on May 9, 2011
And they grieve too, so sorry you lost two kittens.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
So sorry ...how sad sweet lady...Hugsss

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 4, 2011
BEAUTIFUL, SAD POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on May 3, 2011
What a surprise for you ... and then what a loss. Mother Nature acts swiftly and in ways we can't understand whether she is dealing with animals or people. With sadness in our heart we are forced to accept a stronger force.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 3, 2011
So very sad, and I also believe they feel pain and heartbreak. One of my dogs is a tiny Chihuahua that I found starving in an alley. She was also pregnant, and she had a very tough delivery. She had four pups, and sadly, one of them was still-born. I know there was great pain and sorrow in her heart when I took the dead little one away and buried it in our yard. She truly loves her other three pups, but she often sits out in our yard right beside that grave.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 2, 2011
I could not agree with you more, Mary. Cats, and Dogs are people who just cannot speak.
Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 2, 2011
Thats a shame, nothing should die before it knows of life...e

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 2, 2011
Sorry to hear the sad news, Mary. I pray the last one survives and does well.

Reviewed on May 2, 2011
Aww, so sorry for your loss! You are ever in my prayers, Mary! A sad write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 2, 2011
Your empathy shines in these verses, Mary. I hope all will be well in spite of the loss. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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