Pain, sharp stabs, needle like jabs
Targeting my poor broken heart
Next my head, frizzled, brain dead
All this and only just the start
Mind in spin, situation no win
Can create no logical thought
Too upsetting, tried forgetting
Losing my inner battle fought
You miserable too, I’m more blue
Even if I know it’s for your sake
Letting you go, seems big no
Sure I making a massive mistake,
Of you thinking, feel I’m sinking
To a place seen once before
Deeper in mire, toward Hell’s fire
Gaping hole appearing in floor
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Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Pain is such a strong and powerful emotion we all must deal with at one time or another. Hope this was fiction and if not, Best Wishes for a brighter tomorrow...
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Very good.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
I hope this is fiction for
your, David..if its not, time
will heal...you will never
forget...but time helps.
Good write on a painful subject..
((Huggs))
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
What a powerful write! The situation is sad, but the poem that it brought about is wonderful! Good job!
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your, David..if its not, time
will heal...you will never
forget...but time helps.
Good write on a painful subject..
((Huggs))
~~Linda~~
- J -