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HALO
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Everything Happens For A Reason....even when....
Photography Artist: http://derekbranski.deviantart.com/ Halo An angel fell from the heavens; Was it an accident of fate? Tumbling from the grace of eternity into this universe of mortal hate… Battered by the loss of freedom, laying on the rocks of regret; bruised beyond recognition; her heart beneath perils wept… The wounds of this angel lying still by her side, my grief over whelms me in honor’s hope I may abide awakened from the dew of morning; I looked deep into her eyes… Her mirrors of emerald splendors; Are reflective of her stormy cries; A precious angel fell from heaven; I rest my weary heart in shame… Glory is this angelic beauty; asking me to call out her name… This angel abandoned her eternity; or was she thrown from the grace of god? Embracing her in mortal unity; I called out her name in sorrows trod… “Halo from the purity of heavens essence; with darkness of grief upon my heart; Your destined name is Love’s Divinity … the beauty of all glory laying here torn apart…” (Written: June5th, 2008 7:30 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Vickie~!

Totally agree - what an ending to a masterpiece!!

�Halo from the purity of heavens essence;

with darkness of grief upon my heart;

Your destined name is Love�s Divinity �

the beauty of all glory laying here torn apart��

LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2008

A very pleasent halo. Intriguing pic too...not too sure what it's suppossed to be! LOL This is kind of like describing a heaven of some sort in a very ethereal way <-Do I use that word too much? I've been told I do LOL

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 27, 2008

This poem touches a spirit withe divinity!
Thank you Sweet Vickie! I felt myself falling into the depths of glory!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner PEACE, Warrior Purple Gypsy Lady Shexoo
STay Positive!

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

Visually satisfying and deeply reflective of the humanization of the heart, it's weathered processes, loss of innocence, an potential end and beginning ... Wonderful. Thank you.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

Excellent, great ending!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Grippint and certainly one to capture the attention of all those who live and love but believe in after. I enjoyed this one tremendously Vick.
Great capture of your chosen subject.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Absolutely superb!Keep up the good work

Edwin

Reviewed by H Cruz

Angelic! This can be interpreted many different ways, I mean we have all lost precious people in our lives that resonate in your poem and wonder at the injustice.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Very inspiring poem, You always make me think and ponder. That's a good thing!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Angels writing about other angels, wrapped in that mysterious Halo.

Georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Beautiful inspiring write!
That what I call Halo from the purity of heavens essence!
your words are captivating and inspiring!!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light..and Hugessss too...Morning Star

Reviewed by Jon Willey

A beautiful piece of art my dear. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Ah! I was transported to another dimension reading your words, and they are beautiful!!!!! Precious, love it!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Beautifully done, Victoria. I paticularly like Stanza 4.
And of course: I rest my weary heart in shame....
- Gene.