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Lost Souls
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~Dark Poetry October~ Let us now hear inside the thoughts of those deep wounds from the heart of stolen dreams cursed into darkness... "Lost Souls"
Photography Artist: Luis Antonio Santos Abarca http://www.flickr.com/people/lasa5/ Lost Souls.wma <---- Poetic Reading Lost Souls Caprice winds called into the chambers of yesterday; Searching for the fevers of litany’s soul… A damnation of curses placed silence upon the lusting wings of freedom; Roving the land upon intrepid trails of glutton’s loveless pledge… An echo bashed from the depths of forgotten hollows; Those dark corridors of impossible dreams… Broken by the demise of sordid givers; …Emotion bore no claims to forgiveness upon bending knee… She stands like a tower of impetuous questions; Her hungers for fulfillments to the tempers’ resting in the veils of defiance… A barren mask of reality …wearing fiendish desires upon her breast; Hungry for love in the monish hands of no-one… Chosen by the passion of her heart’s stolen calling; She roves the canvas of private thoughts… Infecting the jewels of prisms greed; Riding the moments of imprecating freedoms; The everlasting punishments are calling her name; To harness her satchel of forbidden temptations; And bind those lost souls to the grave of mortuary’s truth… (Written: October 8^th, 2009 7:55 a/m) with the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies: Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… *Or was that supposed to be Love?* *Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley* Sincerely Bound By Incantations, Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 15, 2009

Chilling, Vickie.
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

Vickie, this one and the accompanying graphic will surely stir feelings of fear and dread into the hearts of males who have too easily taken advantage of a woman's loving heart. Well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

dark words that spin a web of dark dersires that capture the mind like an unsuspecting fly, surely the mistress of the dark has excelled heselfr with smooth seductive words of dark foreboding pulling us into her realm of evil.
well done Vickie.
Edgar Allan Poe, eat your heart out, or maybe our dark temptress will do the honours!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...emotions bore no claim of forgiveness..." a Supreme Witch of unspeakable vile drenched in vilified darkness poetess, worth a most welcome to the black pages written in red with virginal blood.
Your name will be called by those that have conquered slimy darkness creeping up on chained captives nostrils as the muse of the Witch urges her to thoughts of depravation in an orchard made of black flowers with thorns!

EDvard, Virgins Protector

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 12, 2009

Dark and forbidding, Vickie, dark as those bleak winter mornings and evenings I remember in Ireland, but infused with your special and unique view and rich expression.

John

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Haunting and goulish 'tis this write.
Vickie, you are so good, ya got me goin.
This write exemplifies a life after deaths earthly abyss.
The imprisoning of soul. A soul out of the rhythm of natural change due to an earthly obsession
that consumed her spirit to a point of transformation, and now trapped inside her own self made abyss, until she realizes the her place in time. A realization bound to eons upon eons accompanied with the pain of what she once was.

Its not nice to screw with mother nature and the father of time as well.
dan

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Victoria, " To harness her satchel of forbidden temptations "
You are the Poetess of all poetess'!
Always,
DeB