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Dissolution's Stare
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~Dark Poetry October~ and now the grooming of appearances lurking inside temptations; delving within the dark muse of poetic expressionism revealing shadows of emotive ideas...
Dissolution’s Stare Fine tooth comb; Made of whales rib; Tearing at perceptions; Looking at scorpions dig… Where are these treasures; The howls of avid night; Crawling under willows reed; Whistling heathens blight… Marching like a sandstone; Caressed by the darkles veil; Shorelines of iniquity; Peered reflections cannot sail… Across the great horizons; The mask of deceptions wear; Seething within disgruntled visions; Fire brewing dissolution’s stare… But rigid are these teeth searching; Which prick like a catalyst goad; Trying to find veiled reasons; Where no bile bridges were ever sowed… (Written: October 6^th, 2009 12:42 p/m) with the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies: Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… *Or was that supposed to be Love?* *Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley* Sincerely Bound By Incantations, Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

And spooky too. Well penned. J'nia

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on October 16, 2009

yes...intense emjoyed

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Dark and intense, well penned

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2009

Perhaps, if I go out and get the black cape and ALL I could write as well as you---afraid not! Sheila is right ! !
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

This dark style fits you just as much as your romantic style. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

You!...unspeakable Dark Pestilence Mistress, why are you searching for my veiled reasons? it's not the mystery good enough for you when I am wearing my best mask of deception?

EDvard

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

Vickie,
This is dark mining, delving, digging, scraping, biting...highly atmospheric, evocative, pricking the conscience.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

ah you painted dark shores indeed, teeth on the prowl...gripping write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very well done as I picture you do a recitation of this one on a fog shrouded dusk of evening at an old graveyard...well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Nice pouty lips!
And i like that word 'darkle'
You invented that one didn't you?
And 'bile bridges' certainly describes,
aptly, a certain aftermath on the human body after dining on
Edvards dungeon delicacies. wonderful!
r