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The Gullet of Life
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~Dark Poetry October~ To Further Express Dark e"MUSE"ments.... Oh that farfetched knave crying abuse of woman! Poor Poor Pity Soul Who do you think you’re dealing with man servant?! doors creek & leathers snap... you are highly mistaken…heathen... there is a an open coffin party in Sweden October 31st, 2009! Given then is when the eternal rest shall occur! & NOT anytime sooner! Your ashes are in the wind…
Photography Artist: http://www.flickr.com/photos/lasa5/ The Gullet of Life Throat of silences kept; seeps into a well of swallowed thoughts… Perceptions disfigured; by ill born scars… The knavery seems to be unfolded permanence; Looking into a kaleidoscope of unending transgressions… Those bruised abrasions seep of sorrows valley; The fortress of secrets buried by briars memory… Dredging in the anchorage of molted needs…the stomach swells to gasp for all those lost breadths… But inside the torment of yesterday, Those thoughts that foresight could never know; held within shadows of an evocation; Where retrospect lurks like a haunting villain; Always there to show the impoverishments of choice; To wail the force of condemnations upon cold stones; To further burden the privations of the lost and dying soul… Yes ...the gallows of his throat …the gullet of life, seeps into a well of swallowed thoughts; Those very perceptions from the depths of his despair… (Written: September 1^st, 2009 10:03 a/m) with the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies: Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… Or was that supposed to be Love? Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley Sincerely Bound By Incantations, Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 27, 2009

dark and lovely Vickie -- take the fight to them, woman -- let them know the convictions of a writer scorned -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 26, 2009

Vickie,
This is weighty, meaningful and very serious writing.

With regard to abusers, there's no room for them on AD and they are never welcome.

With you all the way, Woman!

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very wired and eerie and so stirs the fire of FReaky Fee.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

This is unusual (for you) and powerful writing.
As an aside, Victoria, know that you are loved.
-gene.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

"When she was good, she was very very good, and when she was bad she was horrid" you run the whole scale Vicky, with finesse

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Hi Victoria,

I haven't been around for awhile and I don't know if I'll ever catch up but your poem had me going in two directions. The first was your subject paying a price for being abusive and the second was of a military nature.(the scars of war)Hopefully not old wounds unable to heal. Peace, Blessings & Friendship Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Vicky, I have a good pair of shining Marines boots that are made for walking all over those kind of jerks. In your position I would formally complain to Matt (and whisper a word to our Ted Glines also, the FBI love to trace cyber-stalkers!!!)

Georg

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Quite a chilling pic and poem here. Gave me a shiver. Well penned. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

wow i pity the sad soul who this is aimed at , i would be running by now.
pure venom in this piece, great writing, it doesn't matter what others think if you believe in yourself that's all matters but you have lots of friends here.
stay happy.
Dave.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Chills run down my spine..
Well done Victoria..too bad it was inspired by real-life.

PS I'm with you dear friend.You are well respected here at AD and if needs be we shall all write to Matt as support for you..OK?
Blessings,

Vesna :)