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Upon Second Look
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This poem & poetic recitation is from a poem written by our den brother:
Dan Rosenhagen...
if you have never read him you really should give him "Upon Second Look"
His poetic voice is beautiful & when I first read this poem
I was utterly moved by it's emotional presence & loving essence...

 

 

Upon Second Look by Dan Rosenhagen.wma

 

Upon a second look
Her beauty touched the sensitivity of his eyes.
Slender she was,
her curving figure stemmed into a delicately radiant facial blossom,
only known to be seen in orchids’ petal and the wings of butterflies.
Passions limbs stretch,
they reach desperately reaching,
rooted in heart’s desire’s chamber,
branching into and beyond the clouds of soul’s skies.  
 
In time they will bear fruits;
the birthing of trust, the rearing of compassion, dedicated faith,
the tender loving of life and the yearning of freedom.
 
Her emotions were seen through eye’s windows,
perched there on spiraling edge’s,
unfolding in graduations from one grade to the next,
 endless degrees of depth revolving,
evolving in revolution traversing twisting circles without conclusions,
only to start again from different perspectives of its living coil.
 
Seeing this, her beauty then touched the sensitivity of his heart.
 
 
 

 

 UPON A SECOND LOOK (youtube in articles scetion)

 


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 Reviews of "Upon Second Look"
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on April 8, 2010
Excellent word usage, in perfect order to enhance the emotional awakening of one totally glued and fascinated by the beauty before him...
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 8, 2010
ROMANTIC and BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2010
After hearing your recitation, reading the poem open yet another window where man can take a second look...

Georg


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Finely expressed, Vickie and Dan

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
As usual Vickie, you write beautiful words.

Your Newfie Friend, Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 7, 2010
Wow, Vic you are bringing life and voice to our work...thank you so much...
fee


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