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Underneath The Waning Breadth
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between the nebulous spectral
Underneath The Waning Breadth Darkness never falls It implants it’s sinister seeds Never leaving it’s derisions of truth Toying inside perceptible clues An illusive stealthy dancer Caught in palling webs Aroused by the slightest mood beam Glistering as cormorant light spheres Into emotional tawdry depths An ignominious monarch of secrets Within inglorious whispery illusions Prying inside cocoons’ living essence Where the grotto of shadow’s songstress sings Weaving lambency in the bleakest hours of ebon Waltzing with an entourage of gloaming intention The scintilla of the unknown conscience lives Surrounding the harrowing effulgence of subterfuge Taunting with the weights of the twilit world An emotional playground pooling sorrow’s well Into the misting presence of disrelishing absurdity Indefinite perpetrator lurking to subsist within brilliance Assaulting obscurity’s shadowy veils of darkness Underneath the waning breadth of pausing moments Never falling nor leaving it’s contemptuousness of light © Poetry By: Victoria L. McColley 2011

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2011

this is amazing writing vickie (see, i spelled it correctly finally). the last stanza is tremendously brilliant, could see it painted somewhere, one for the ages.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Darkness never falls it implants......like that thought. Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 28, 2011

Shades within shades, Vickie, and all too much for
my scattered brain this morning to grasp, i'll save this and return when things are clearer. The writing is as ever top drawer, laced
with vision and superior expression.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

some very vivid imagery,well done

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Victoria, One of 'your' best!
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

As always a outstanding write. Your romantic interlude is so polished.
Love and Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on February 27, 2011

Such beauty in every line, Victoria. And I love all the
alliteration...especially the s's:

into the misting presence of derelishing absurdity...

Yesssss. -gene.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

I see this poem in colours...mainly midnight blues, silvers with a touch of starlight yellow and mossy greens...the words weave a magic that blends with the differing shades and hues...Sheer Magic!

Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

another intensely written poem by the master of Romantic notions. This is one stunning poem.. Loved the last stanza.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber