As usual you not only met the challenge, but surpassed expectations.
Bobbi
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2006
You always know where to place the
words where they need to be.
Have missed you!
Know you had a great time in Holland
Lurve ya,
Ron
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2006
In just over 30 words, quite a poem has been achieved, of a love that is, is no more.. Is the bun fight between you and ETW bout to restart?lolol and have Matt falling out of his tree...
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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Nearly missed this...glad I caught it. A wonderful challenge answered with a winning reply. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Soo nice to see you here again; we have missed you, gurl! :) Wonderful poem; very nicely presented and written! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Bobbi
words where they need to be.
Have missed you!
Know you had a great time in Holland
Lurve ya,
Ron
Love Tinka
Nice weaving. Good to hear from you.
Best regards,
Leland
Great to know that you are not retiring!
This poem is not your usual style, but it is nicely-written. Enjoyed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)