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Lies
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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No need to tell me of things that are not
Promises made, then broken "I forgot"
Lies like old paint covering a wall
Bleeding through cracks at a slow crawl

'Round and 'round a perpetual train
Staying on with nothing to gain
Lies and dark smoke, choking I cough
This is the last stop, I'm getting off.

(C) all rights reserved MS 2002


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 Reviews of "Lies"
Reviewed by Sheryl Sorenson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
Great write!

Reviewed by James Samdavid1
Reviewed on April 8, 2002
Wonderful write.Deep thoughts. Samdavid1

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2002
Aaah, well-said!!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on April 8, 2002
Lies are alot of wasted energy///great write!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2002
I don't blame you. I would get off too. The ride is too hard. Bill

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2002
good for you.

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on April 7, 2002
well written. i like 'em short & sweet.-steve

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 7, 2002
it's never too late...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2002
I really like this,I don't want to repeat what the others said, so I will just say, great write. A lot to think about on this one. Floria

Reviewed on April 6, 2002
Good use of metaphors and great use of words!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2002
Fantastic! great use of metaphor...


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