I Can't Accept (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tyrone Godfrey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

Nicely writen. Direct and to the point

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 18, 2002

How well you captured the moment...very moving writeing!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 15, 2002

Very nice write. I hope you and your daughter are better soon.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 14, 2002

Oh this is heartfelt Marilyn! Hope you and your daughter will feel better very soon.

May

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2002

Very moving write--I do know how you feel!
You've expressed it so well here...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2002

sad but beautiful

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on May 12, 2002

there is nothing more painful than the tears and pain we see and feel in our children. i hope that she will soon find the one who recognizes her true value. happy mothers day, sweetie...and all the best of smiles.
hugs
krissy

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on May 12, 2002

marilyn- WELL SAID. WELL READ.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 12, 2002

Very heartfelt! I hope your daughter will be well very soon with your support. I have also been there, and I know how you feel.

Take care, both of you!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on May 11, 2002

So heartfelt and emotional... I can identify with this so much...
Happy Mother's Day, Marilyn, and thanks again.....
Jenni

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on May 11, 2002

oh that we could shield them.... but you do so well to validate. Wonderful
Josie

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2002

Yes my dear, you really are a wonderful mother and it must make ur daughter feel less worse coz she has a beautiful, supportive person like u by her side. Great write Marilyn!

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2002

well penned ... j

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2002

Pain and hurt is part of all of our lives when we lose someone we cherish and love with all of our hearts. I have experienced that pain too, and it is nice to see that you understand your daughter's pain; because I know you can understand the pain of others who suffer the way I have suffered too. Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 10, 2002

You captured the moment and the pillow can't help but be wet...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2002

I know you will always be there for your daughter........Heartfelt.....