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Sprinkles of Love
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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You gave me a slice of cake with sprinkles
And love. They were of the purest colors…the colors
Of your love. A love you gave, and a love I felt so
Soft and sweet.

I became a pretty sprinkle and went with
The others as they twirled and lulled around
In mid-air. I danced to open music boxes as
The other sprinkles recited your love poems.

My beautiful sprinkles of love from you…such radiant
Colors to cherish, was suddenly taken from me and handed
To another, just as gently as it was given to me.

Forever gone…

© all rights reserved MS 2002


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 Reviews of "Sprinkles of Love"
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
Reviewed on June 7, 2002
My God! Thats an excellent poem and the end blew me away...VERY unexpected!!!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on May 18, 2002
Very moving...well written.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2002
I enjoyed the way you worked with the sprinkles.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2002
great sentiments.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2002
Marilyn, great lines in here, love it. Floria

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2002
Sweet...sweet! Nice write Marilyn!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
So lovely..tho so sad....
Jenni

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
lovely, sad, and why doen't it ever last...?(;
boo hoo is how I'm feeling...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
Love the imagery, the expression here...

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
marilyn- nice write. very smooth.-steve

Reviewed on May 16, 2002
Lovely and sentimental!!!!!

May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
Nice poem.....


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