When I think of the times we’ve cried
At nothing at all, or sat in silence and
Laughed at nothing at all, I realize that
We will not be silly together anymore.
Now and forever friend, please
Don’t go
I remember when I was so bundled up
From the winter’s harshness and couldn’t
Tie my shoe, you bent down and did it for me.
Nothing was ever expected or demanded, owed
Or paid back. Things came from our hearts
Three dollars between us to buy French fries, only
To have them fall on the floor while we stood there
In silence, both wanting to pick them up. Not a
Word was said, only hysterical laughter.
Now and forever friend, please
Don’t go
Trying on fancy dresses in an exclusive store, in one
Dressing room having fun like teenagers. Was the best!
When I was about to do something foolish, you came
To my house and pulled me outside to talk in your car.
Now and forever friend, is my lipstick too bright?
Now and forever friend, do I look like a fright?
No, Friend you should NOT wear a G-string and curlers
for your husband tonight!
I need to be strong for you now. Unlock
Your heart and let me take some of your pain without
Worrying that you will cause me pain
Now…right now damn it!! I have never had to ask you
For anything, you just gave, so I am asking you now,
Give me this chance to not only cry with you, but to
Cry for you.
Sending best wishes your way for both of you. Great poem, but I think if both parties care this much, they will find a way to always be in touch. Good luck.
Eloquent expression of the joys and pains of friendship - but three dollars for French Fries? Come to England and I'll treat to to proper fish and chips for less than that. (English chips are thicker and more succulent than French Fries.)
Oh, I am so sorry...for your friend and for you caring for you as much as you do.
Blessings on you and her...and well, my nature forbids me to say what I want
to say about someone who would do this to a family! Great emotional poem!
Wonderful write--wonderful friendship! Such friendships are blessings...
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2002
You capture your friendship so very well. Hi, I remember you from Writtenbyme! I was darkskypoet there... :)
Reviewed by (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2002
People have beautiful hearts, but you're one of them who have a Great and Beautiful one, that hold a lot of love in it.
Take care of your friend.
Love and Aloha, Mundo
Marilyn...you have written something from your heart and soul that has reached out and touched deeply. I hope your friend will allow you to cry with her. It is an excellent write that you have shared.
Amor
This is so heartfelt. You are a great friend to have. Very soothing indeed!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2002
It does not surprise me one bit of your loving and caring nature, Mele. You are a precious soul with so much love and anyone that is a friend of yours, is truly blessed.
Beautiful write, hun...
hugs,
Tee
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2002
You are an amazing friend, and I am truly sorry that this friend of yours is having such a hard time. But she's lucky to have you, and I have no doubt that if anyone can help her through this rough stuff, it'll be you.
Well done, a sad moment when a friend has to move on.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2002
I enjoed this. My sister has always been a friend to me. She thought she and her family were going to have to move out of the rent house, so brother went and bought the rent house. Tired of her moving.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2002
Marilyn, this is so touching and so beautiful. I felt every word ... every idea ... every sentence ... and I felt a deep pain in my heart, because I know this is written from yours. You are a wonderful writer and a more wonderful person, and it is a deep honor to know you. Your friend Bill P.S. Maybe now I wll stop walking around curves and go straight to the goal.
A book-length psychodynamic study of pathological narcissism, relationships
with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder, using a new vocabulary.
Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
Blessings on you and her...and well, my nature forbids me to say what I want
to say about someone who would do this to a family! Great emotional poem!
Such a wonderful tribute
to your friend...
Hope she resolves her
problem soon....
Beautiful as always...
Take care of your friend.
Love and Aloha, Mundo
Amor
This is so heartfelt. You are a great friend to have. Very soothing indeed!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Beautiful write, hun...
hugs,
Tee
Love Scada