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First
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Do you think of me first
When you wake at daybreak

Do you think of me first
In the shower and compare
Our recent loving to the heat
Of the water

Do you think of me first
When your phone rings.

Do you think of me first
And doodle my name on a
Pad while you’re on hold
On the phone

Do you think of me first
When you see lovers holding
Hands

Do you think of me first
When a client holds you up
And I am standing on a dark
Street corner waiting for you

Do you think of me when it’s
Late and haven’t spoken to
Me for thirteen hours

Do you think of me first and
Come running when I’ve been
Hurt.

Do you think of me

Do you think



© MS 2002


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 Reviews of "First"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
never out of my mind....very good!!!

Reviewed on November 25, 2002
can i give you a 100? you deserve it....
*~*~happy thanksgiving, dear heart!~*~*
thanks for your review; it was sweet! :)
love, me. (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
I don't think men think this way. At least according to the last guy I was with. Good write.

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
What women hasn't had these thoughts...I still think that way...lol! ~ Dee

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
once in my life, I was so obsessed - it was the most wonderful time...so filled with the other...but, so very rare.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Yes Marilyn actions speak louder than words.
You know that, and you know also that no relationship is ever perfect. When the bad outways the good; then that is the time to be concerned. But you will find you have a balance in life. Sort of like riding on a 'tetter-totter' up and down up and down up and down up and down. I better get off here, I am getting dizzy. Bill (((hugs)))

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Wow!! Can't really say how this hit me, maybe bittersweet...I'm pretty sure my husband does not think any of these things, but he/we used to, which, in the end, is okay. We had many wonderful years alone together, now we're in our 40's with 2 girls under twelve, he thinks of his job, he's a workaholic~I think "housewife" thoughts, and poetic nonsense, when we wake up. Now I'm getting depressed, Marilyn...

:)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Marilyn,
This is gorgeous, and YES! YES! These are the feelings we wish for, if only... Why is it, that it is so hard?
Geeze I loved this, it is really incredible!

You touched me deep this morning!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
No Ted, you dont, but like Tim said, it's the "actions" then some of us won't have to wonder/ask

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Yes, Sweet Lady, this is what we want them to do!

Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
I agree with Ted. The answer is always yes, but actions speak louder than words. Excellent write!
Cheers,
Tim

Reviewed by Little Miss...
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Marilyn...
This just oozed warmth and loving that can only occur between two people very much in love...
I adored this :)
Take care,
Love Jilly x

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 24, 2002
Beautiful write Marilyn! Very well written.
Jack

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2002
This is not something that you ask most men and expect them to answer honestly.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 24, 2002
He better think of you first!;-)lovely wishful write Marilyn...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2002
I've asked these questions...Wonderful and heartfelt..Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2002
I love romance..it is where the heart is..Very well written!!!


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