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Well Hon...
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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I know you’re going to leave, but I’ll still try
and keep you for as long as I can-

Every time you leave the ache pulsates
and tightens in my throat- I die a little

That warning sign; those dreaded words
“Well hon…” that I know come just before
you’re going to tell me you have to go are
ringing in my ears

I’ll ramble to detain you, to keep you from
saying them. Please don’t say them…
shhh

I can’t make the best of it and hide my
Feelings, I just don’t know how

My heart chokes for you and your gentle
smile, I need your strong hands on my
shoulders pulling me into your embrace
and rocking with me

It’s not enough that I have your picture, it’s
not enough that I have your letters of love
the memories are not enough when everything
I have- everything I am is starving and needs
to be fed by you

Stay and flirt with me in whispers once more
while you tease me with touches in a hidden
tunnel where water puddles at the entrance

Take my palm and let your mouth and tongue
tell my fortune while your eyes gaze through
mine to release the clutch that’s causing this
ache in my heart

Stay and wait for the answer

Stay and listen to the faintest sounds of my heart
calling out to you in a glorious song; searching for
you; wanting you.

My heart refuses to hear “well hon…” because
Well hon…it has been released and it’s strong and
Powerful and will suppress any thoughts of you
leaving



© MS 2002





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 Reviews of "Well Hon..."
Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on December 9, 2002
Very emotional and yet so sensual at the same time. One of the better writes I've read recently! Thanks for sharing it with here at A/D.


Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
straight from the heart....

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
This touches in places we try to forget
or ignore you had written a sad tale but made it beautiful in thought

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
This was so saddening~
But written perfectly!

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Excellent Marilyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Heartfelt and wrenching...well done...he has to stay;-)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
What's not to like?

Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Wonderfully-written Marilyn!!!!! Well-crafted and very creative indeed!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
great verse of longing and wanting..

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Mele, this is a beautiful, yet heart rendering write. (((hugs)))

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Sad but beautiful write, very nice Marilyn!
Jack

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Oh Marilyn, only the best poems make me cry and choke up. This is so strong and deep and wonderful. What more can I say. Never have I read a poem by you that compares. You are more than a housewife poet, who dabbles in this art. You have risen to become magnificient! A world of hunger and love in one poem. Bill Murray ((hugs))

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
This is intense and intensively beautiful.

Reviewed on December 1, 2002
This was so intense and moving...It just went straight to my heart.

Excellent,
Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2002
Powerful write, I can feel the sharp pain of not wanting him to go. You are so gifted, My Friend.


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