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Hello, What's Your Name?
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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You came to me like a gentle breeze
with a “Hello, what’s your name?” days
later, you came back with a polite “Just
wanted to thank you…”

You said you were shy and a hopeless
romantic and I smiled and sighed deeply

You wooed me with your witty flirtatious
humor and I laughed and called you a
tease

The tender way you kissed me made my
heart stop. It reached so deep inside of
me and took the very air I breathe

Then the words came; the words of love-
your feelings declared for me, and suddenly
I was absorbed by you- cruising through
your blood, not wanting to ever see the
light of day

I was lost in you- my permanent home
surrounded by love and trust

I knew immediately that in your life was
where I belonged and where I wanted to
stay

Now, my heart is tightly sewn with your
love; every stitch securely in place

You fill my days with fantasies, and my
nights with dreams I never imagined

Your love is my aura

“Hello, what’s your name?”

“Dreamcametrue ”



© MS 2002


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 Reviews of "Hello, What's Your Name?"
Reviewed by Peter Engelman
Reviewed on December 8, 2002
A tribute to love found! Very nice write.

Reviewed by Angels Near
Reviewed on December 6, 2002
This is just spellbound....I love it! 10+++

Reviewed by John Valentino (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
I'm back! Did you miss me? I sure did miss you. Let's catch up soon OK? -John

PS- Fantastic write sugar!

Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
Good write. Excellent ending.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
This is very sweet and loving! Nice write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
gorgeous..."your love is my aura"....what else could be better

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
This is so beautiful you made me feel like there's still hope out there....
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
I love seeing the happy endings as dreams come true. Excellent write, Marilyn.
Amor

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Oh my, sounds perfect! I love a happy story.

Happy Holidays my Sweet.
Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed on December 4, 2002
outstanding write, marilyn! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed on December 4, 2002
"Now, my heart is tightly sewn with your
love; every stitch securely in place"
Really got to me, sweetie! Such a beautiful write from a beautiful and loving woman... (((honihoni)))

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Wonderful write friend ...

Keep it up

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
very light
refreshing
great job

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Magnificent. Flowing, loving, evocative.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Pure perfection, how I love this poem.

Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Excellent writing Marilyn!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Excellent Marilyn, thank you

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
love the way you crafted this...beautiful Marilyn...;)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Very nice Marilyn, I liked this.
Jack

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
I like your wording with the combined thoughts represented as one.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Good one!
Reminds me of the old song,
"What's your name, is it Mary or Sue?"

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
wow! very good! so lovely..


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