this so moving, you just seem to read the words, letting them soak into your mind. I love the way how you had he moon express it's feelings when it usually is the other way around,,such a cool write,,
BRAVO! Excellent write, it sent me into my child-like fantasy zone, with a much more modern fairytale tone, and kept me captured and enamored all the way through!! And, it reminds me of my pseudonym, Moongem!! Love your descriptions, Marilyn!
"The pearl he now
Holds in his hand
Is Moon’s tear shed in
The sea "
Love it! :D Oh, by the way, I'm also a Moonchild of Cancer's sea-related sign, The Crab!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Beautiful imagery, love this!
BTW hoping this New Year is full of blessings for you and your loved ones!!
Asa D Seeley, a young Afro American man, shares his struggle to leave his past behind as he reaches for his future. In his one-of-a-kind style, he searches for answers...from the visible & invisible. A Memoir in Poetical/Prose form.
"The pearl he now
Holds in his hand
Is Moon’s tear shed in
The sea "
Love it! :D Oh, by the way, I'm also a Moonchild of Cancer's sea-related sign, The Crab!
BTW hoping this New Year is full of blessings for you and your loved ones!!
Warm Love,
Brittany
Jack
Peg
Love from India - Joel -
Amor