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Moon's Choice
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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Sitting on a
Quarter moon
He fishes from
The sea

Thinking of the
Love he left and
And sweet, sweet
Memories

He feels a tug
Pulls up the line
And finds a
Perfect pearl

So creamy white
And smooth it is
It seems to light
The world

He holds the gem
Tight in his hand
So thankful for
Good luck

He hears a soft cry
From above
He turns and then
Looks up

The moon begins
To tell him of
A love that it
Let go

To be admired
In the sky
Where it could
Brightly glow

And now it comes
Out every night
Alone in
Misery

The pearl he now
Holds in his hand
Is Moon’s tear shed in
The sea

Moon made him love
Moon made him crazed
Depended on
It’s mood

Moon could make him sweet
Or roam the street
Moon sometimes made
Him brood

Moon gave up love
For power and fame
That’s the choice
It made

Now there’s no wind
Clouds stop in front
And Moon begins
To fade



© copyright MS 2003


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 Reviews of "Moon's Choice"
Reviewed by coni lea harris (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
this so moving, you just seem to read the words, letting them soak into your mind. I love the way how you had he moon express it's feelings when it usually is the other way around,,such a cool write,,

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
BRAVO! Excellent write, it sent me into my child-like fantasy zone, with a much more modern fairytale tone, and kept me captured and enamored all the way through!! And, it reminds me of my pseudonym, Moongem!! Love your descriptions, Marilyn!

"The pearl he now
Holds in his hand
Is Moon’s tear shed in
The sea "

Love it! :D Oh, by the way, I'm also a Moonchild of Cancer's sea-related sign, The Crab!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Beautiful imagery, love this!

BTW hoping this New Year is full of blessings for you and your loved ones!!

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Beautiful.

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
nice in story in a poem..

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Powerful and wonderful message inside this poem! So brilliantly written, Marilyn!

Warm Love,
Brittany

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Very nice Marilyn, I like it!
Jack

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Exceptional, I love this one.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Oh Marilyn this is per beauty and precious.. So elaborate of creation in simplicity of ellegance.
Peg

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
I love the way you brought things together, a perfect picture.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
What a gem this is Marilyn...truly one of your best...the imagery is exquisite...

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Wow, what imagery. Lovely my friend, lovely

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
Beautifully said, Marilyn
Amor

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 2, 2003
like pearls, this one is a rare find


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