She Needs (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by me

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

it builds and builds, then it seems to lessen- the pain that is.
good illustration

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2003

Marilyn, this is so creative and beautifully written. Wonderful work here.
"a lasting
touch that will pump
cleansed loving
feelings

through
her veins
to ease the
pain in her
heart "
Splendid!!
Floria

Reviewed by Deborah Carter

Reviewed on January 16, 2003

What a marvellous poem! Deb

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah

Reviewed on January 16, 2003

Marilyn, this is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you have shaped it. Awesome write! :o)))

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

:) You did this magnificently, Marilyn, beautiful in form and in words!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

Wow! That's really cool. Also a great write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

Oh Marilyn,
This goes far beyond
beautiful...
Just Awesome...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

how did you DO that? love love love the format And the text. great stuff
josie

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

Marilyn, this is so beautiful but sad though

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

Incredible, Marilyn, in its beauty and form.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2003

Very clever...good choice of words too.

~E

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

To you sweet sweet Marilyn ... I dedicate the song, "I Got That Loving Feeling." May it follow you wherever you go and always remind you that you are deeply loved. Any man would be proud to die for your love. What an excellent job structuring the poem to make it standout. But it would have stood out anyway. It is excellent and you have become terrific in forming and displaying your ideas. 20plus+++++++++

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

your poem is like a ornament waiting to hang on someones heart...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

Hey thats neat! Beautiful write too!
Jack

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

You put a lot of work in this excellent piece..
Thanks for sharing Marilyn...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

Wow! this is fantastic Marilyn not only the form, but the verse and flow inside it...beautifully done!