He Needs Me (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Excellent write reality lies in this one
Tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Oh how wonderful
the feeling of love...
Yes, he will be back.
Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Who can tell that love is madness
if known has not love caressess....
well done..Marco

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Marilyn,

I adore this...
"I need him; I need him
To just hold me
and breathe life back into me."

When we love someone so much, it is as if there breath is ours, our life line.
This pulls at the heart!!

Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxoxo

(((((Marilyn)))))

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

I need our life, our future
I know it�s what he wants

Great lines...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Beautiful and strong--just like your love...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

One can only hope.

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

Wonderful write, to know each are needed is what really counts.
Nancy

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

HI...very deep and realistic write...cheers.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

Excellent reality in this one

Reviewed by Eileen

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

geat write Marilyn...you are really going deep lately;-) excellent...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

Beautiful words!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

Beautiful write your word tickle the tongue
as you read them

Thank you for all you kind comments and support

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

I like this because there are several different ways to interpret it. And that is the true magic of poetry. Well done.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

such a sad poem Idont know if you meant it that way but it was wow to have that devotion for something that is gone and still to hold onto a fragment of hope that it will come back is seriously a sign of true strength this is another fine example of your great poetry Nice job on this one!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

cool write, it sound like u both love each other great.

William