Defy Gravity (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 15, 2003

Excellent one here

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

vivid.
Wild imagery

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Wow not only are you defying gravity marilyn..you do it so creatively...great poem...love the structure..floria

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Hi Marilyn,
Excellent one here...
Loved it!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

ok i'll go
josie

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

awwwwwww so romantically sweet this was a awesome poem nice job on this very sweet and romantic poem

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

You have broken the bounds of gravity, thank you for taking me with you. Well written, exellent form and presentation.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

This is one of your very best writes.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Could float away on the warm sensuality of this one!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Marylin, wonderful poem. I also thought you set-up was quite clever.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Beautiful poem....love the shapes. Excellent.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Breathtaking Marilyn! This is so excellent...makes my spine tingle.
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Great Write!

ty
tony:)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Beautiful, just beautiful,

William

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

This is very excellent write...hats off to you...BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

lovemaking without gravity... now that's something i'd really like to do...

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Marilyn,
I do not like gravity, I love to fly, and this is a beautiful poem describing that feeling!!

Love the form!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

great poem and wonderful form Marilyn...this is a real beauty!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

You put some work in this, Bravo!
I have an extra fan........

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Very pretty Marilyn! Always a pleasure to read your work.
Jack

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Beautifully done, and it isn't easy getting all those lines in order and to keep the poem making sense. Good poem too.
~E