I Am Not Mad (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Marilyn,
Being hurt isn't something men can understand I suppose? It's happened to me over the years but we patch up and make do and try again. From hurt to anger isn't very far away. Great rant!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Whoa! This was great emotional write!

Next time, just ask him "what do you want for dinner?" and he'll answer, "Nothing."

Then you can sit back and relax won't be feeling like this. Heehee!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Absolutely "Wow!"--powerfully done!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Excellent writing, Marilyn. You are so talented.
Chrissie

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

maybe he had performance anxiety?

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Wow... you sure weren't mad... I'm sorry, I know how that can be... I'd say he got an adequate tongue lashing :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Marilyn, this is very well written. The reader can experience fully the hopelessness and despair in your words. Thank you for sharing this with me!

Reviewed by Patrick Talty

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

What an interesting and effective form you've created to let out these feelings! The frustration and anger comes through strongly, forcefully and validates my view that free verse, powered by a lively imagination, is hard to beat when used to articulate an emotive, "in-yer-face" theme such as this one. Sterling effort, Marilyn!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2003

this was a great write!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 19, 2003

So expressive and sad Marilyn. Here's a hug for you. Grady

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2003

Angry Angry ...

Still

Lovely Lovely ...

Mar... Calm Calm

;)
Sanilnath

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

excellent write...Marilyn

William

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

OMG Marilyn,
I would hate to see you mad...lol
Great rant...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

A rant it is, pretty lady.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

This MUST be a good write! I feel like I just got a butt chewing! LOL Well done Marilyn!

Jack

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

WOW!! Missed your work...enjoyed this very much.... Thank you.
Jenni

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Super rant...great write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Great rant!

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

ohhhh ouch.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Awesome Write, Marilyn

tony

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

and you have every right to be... good verbal jawing...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

PRICELESS. Great write Lady.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

The words have been said, but not the ones I
Expected to hear, so you can�t try and make it
Up with �doing my back�
Please, just get out, get out and leave me alone ...
God this make a lot of sense!!
This is soooooo true!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Whoa! What a write! Ranting is good. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Good rant.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

I refuse to leave.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

This one cuts like a knife, excellent, and such a good rant!

Reindeer