Take me to the edge of the world
to sit on a dune with my feet in
the sand and watch one puffy
cloud stretch it’s hand out to
play tag with the sun
I’ll climb the rocks that jut in and out
while in a boat, hoards of tourists with
their binoculars and cameras around
their necks in position hoping that
they’ll spot a whale
They wave, and I wave back
If I were a whale, I’d lie on my side
and spray them with water from
my blowhole to the tune of “Whatcha
lookin’ at”
I love the taste of the salty mist in the
air as the gentle waves flap against
the rocks in sync with the dock bell
I love watching the ocean chase the
sand by tip-toeing in and out; teasing
it with it’s shimmering sequence
Oh…here right now I feel myself settling
into a peaceful trance
I hear the dock bell slowly fade to a
light dong while I enjoy the quiet
company of my solitude
This has a relaxing feel to it, I wish I had some waterfront property and could look at the ocean everyday
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
Incredibly beautiful, Marilyn. I love your poetry.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
This was a truly beautiful inhale, but can I exhale now? ;O)
Such beautiful imagery, and since I think I was a creature of the water in a past life because I LOVE the water this write fit me just right!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
this was a heavenly write Marilyn.......I am sure God was sitting right next to you.....watching your every move.....dear Lord this was really very beautiful,peaceful and heavenly!!
Love
tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Thank you for this beautiful moment! LOL about the whale :-)
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William
Such beautiful imagery, and since I think I was a creature of the water in a past life because I LOVE the water this write fit me just right!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reindeer
~Chrissie
Love
tinka
Love, JC xoxoxo
Jenni
Love the imagery this is so
beautiful .............
{{SMILES}}}}
PJ
Have a great night and day tomorrow....
Jack