Loved the awareness of words said without depth of feeling-"empty words that lacked definition"-
You're so right-where words come from the mouth only and are not spoken from the heart.
Reviewed by Shae (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2002
Good write, heartfelt, emotional.
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 31, 2002
You may not be very good at relationships. but you are very good at writing.
You'll find Mr. Right because U have a very poetic heart, which makes U a beautiful woman inside and outside. Excellent poem.
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2002
Namaste Lori
It is so good to read you again hun. Hang in there sweetie. I know you have what it takes to soar to greater heights. You know how to find me, should you ever need an ear, a shoulder or just a friend.
Love and Light
dreamweaver
Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2002
how very true!!!!... no one should ever settle.... know in your heart you are worth so much more!!!....
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2002
The emotion in this poem shows me that you can and will find a good relationship. Unfortuntly we seem to have to go through a few rough ones first.
This is merely my opinion and not meant as fact...but sometimes the best expression is born directly from what is heartfelt. This is an excellent write full of genuine emotion and sometimes that, if even for the moment, is all that really matters. For time is linear and the greatest teacher of all. I also loved the portrayal.
I feel a little sad as you describe your hurt but also you are taking the blame for this pass in your life for not understanding.
All of us regrettably must learn through experience and most of the time it is bitter.
Wonderful rhymes of poems are created though the penetrating feelings of hurt and
realistic feelings of real injuries.
Who knew the Wright's had a trunk full of hidden family secrets? Searching for treasure and hidden family secrets is one way to fuel the flames of passion.
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You're so right-where words come from the mouth only and are not spoken from the heart.
J.
It is so good to read you again hun. Hang in there sweetie. I know you have what it takes to soar to greater heights. You know how to find me, should you ever need an ear, a shoulder or just a friend.
Love and Light
dreamweaver
About the poem - this is sad. I hope you will find good relationship and good love very soon for you are too beautiful to be like this.
Loved this poem, heartfelt!!!!!
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
good write!!! Beautiful pic!
I feel a little sad as you describe your hurt but also you are taking the blame for this pass in your life for not understanding.
All of us regrettably must learn through experience and most of the time it is bitter.
Wonderful rhymes of poems are created though the penetrating feelings of hurt and
realistic feelings of real injuries.
Garrett.
Trixie