I Promise You the Stars (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Monika Arnett-Cochran

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

Delightfully inspiring! I can relate. Thank you with friendly greetings, Monika Arnett

Reviewed by Steve Reichard (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Fantastic poem with lots of heart felt emotion.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

lovely...

Reviewed by Mars Canning (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

spoken with depth of feels touched my heart greatly

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

It is always through the memories of solitude, heartbreak and betrayal that we triumph with our greatest works in expression. You have become better for it in many ways. Let them be forced to see your heart and soul before they speak.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

the emphasis of "How he lied, how he lied." was fantastic. Loved this!

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Great poetry! It's also a great source for letting those feelings out too, isn't it? If I had not had my writing a few years ago when I had my heart busted wide open, I would have gone insane and then I would have never met my husband...lol. Great style sweetie! ;)

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

A ~10~ is not near high enough! I couldn't agree more with what Alexander has said.
And this poem, I find incredible!!
~Jen

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Wow Lori ... great ... u again came with a good piece ...

When u look at the star ... look at it with a beautiful smile u will love that ...

Keep smiling

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

This is excellent...very well expressed!!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

So true, so true...Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Beautiful write, Lori...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Ah Lori so glad to see you...a beautifully poetic vision... though rueful...;-)

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Beautifully written and said! Wonderful poem!
Cheers
Allain

Reviewed by Kathleen M. Kohl (author)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Beautiful, potent, I loved it Lori

Kathy

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Sad and lovely write...
Especially like the third stanza...

Reviewed by atomar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Nice analogy (stars - flowers).
Loved it!
Too bad the blossoms brought with them the sting of heartbreak...

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Great poem, Lori. Many a knight in shining armor is nothing more than used car salesman--a bullshit artist--not a lover. :) Still there is beauty and poetry and yes--that vision of love, and all the pain that comes with wanting that something more, something better. I guess your poems bring up a lot of my own memories.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

Beautiful write!