My Future (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2003

This is a wonderful dedication to your brother and his future wife I wish them all the best your poem was such a loving , kind special gift beautifully written !

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on September 11, 2002

Beautiful optimistic love poem.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

Beautifully written poem. Lovely to read.

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Genuine and heartfelt--from the soul--as all poetry must be.

Reviewed by Carol DeVaney

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Excellent poem, Lori. Very, very nice.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on September 4, 2002

Sorry I haven't swung by in a while. Saying I have been busy is trite, I know, but it is the truth..lol.
Great poem! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Jeffrey Callico (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2002

I know this is very special to you...great. You may want to correct the spelling error in the title...keep up the good stuff.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2002

I can think of no greater gift anyone can give then the gift of your beating heart filled with love. This write is so truly special!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on August 20, 2002

Beautiful Lori!!! Twice you made me smile this morning! Thank you!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on August 19, 2002

Very beautiful...congrats to the couple!

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

I like the way you give a 3-D look at your feelings here, see, taste, and feel, it makes what you are saying live. J.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

the future looks bright...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

Always better knowing there is a bright side of an excellent writer as you, Lori.

Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

I liked this piece. You have a strong command
of languange.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

Escellent poem hun.. Best of wishes to your brother and his wife to be. <smile> And BTW hun... please read my last poem I posted, I think you will be interested in my newest project. <smile>

Love
Melanie

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

Truly beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

lovely gift

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

A beautiful dedication of love Lori and welcome back. Nice to see this posted.
Amor

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

This just wonderful!

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2002

I know you can write beautiful poetry, Lori. Excellent. Well I'm off into the sunset. I was losing my identity at the Den and needed my freedom. Love, Alex