This is really true Lori. But there is nothing wrong in dreaming. I could see the stars in your eyes as you reminisced, and then the disappoitment when the clouds covered the stars. A wonderful write and I could actually see what you wrote through the images you painted here. Thank you for sharing sis.
Also thank you for your comments on my new poem. And yes I was happy when I wrote it because I felt a great weight lifted off of me. Thank you.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
"To withdraw myself from myself has
ever been my sole, my entire, my sincere
motive in scribbling at all." Byron...
I sense, in your work, that you always
strive to be the best you can be.
Great write and great flow, I can actually and was actually picturing this as song lyrics for the rythem is wonderful. enjoyed this one a lot Lori...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2009
Nicely done. Poe is one of my favorites. Sounds just like the Annabel Lee poem
The transition from joyful imaginings into reality is a bristly one to say the least. You do an excellent job of instilling both spaces and feelings into the reader. Excellent poem, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry
Lori,
More Poe, for sure, but definitely you...and stylistically excellent; that bump back to earth is painful but very real and you don't try to gloss over it. I love this poem.
Psychic wiccan Deja Hamilton pulls shapeshifter Lincoln McCabe from the lake, and the two form an alliance against the covetous older brother who wants Lincoln dead.
(and Poe and Byron) on this one. Never missed a beat. -gene.
Blessings and Love - Micke
enjoyed much
Love & peace
William
Ron
Also thank you for your comments on my new poem. And yes I was happy when I wrote it because I felt a great weight lifted off of me. Thank you.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Great imagery, so well done.
Love Ankin
TRASK...
JOYCE - HIS INSPIRATIONS
ever been my sole, my entire, my sincere
motive in scribbling at all." Byron...
I sense, in your work, that you always
strive to be the best you can be.
hugs
fee
My new favorite of yours - instantly hooked by meter and rhyme - reads like a classic. BRAVA! Take a bow - well deserved!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Anna
Take care,
Sherry
More Poe, for sure, but definitely you...and stylistically excellent; that bump back to earth is painful but very real and you don't try to gloss over it. I love this poem.
John