Memory's Masterpiece (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 19, 2011

ILLUSIONS ARE DANGEROUS FELLOWS...THEY HAVE NO FLAWS, AT ALL. BUT WE ALL HAVE THEM...THEY TAKE US OVER THE ROUGH WATERS AND THROUGH THE DARK NIGHTS...WHILE WE WAIT...FOR REALITY. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Wonderful Masterpiece !!!! Thank you for such a write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 12, 2003

There is no revision necessary
This is a masterpiece Lori

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

No revision needed...
Beautiful.

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2003

"Isn't it strange how memories can create the illusion of a masterpiece"...so true and so beautifully put! I pray 2003 turns out to be more wonderful than you could ever hope for!

Reviewed by Terry Vivian (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2003

An ache, a longing. It all sounds very good. Its got the 'feel'.

Reviewed by Terence Vivian

Reviewed on January 2, 2003

Lori, this is so good. I don't know why you'd think this ever should need any revision of any kind. This sounds great! Let it stay... Very nice write..

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on January 1, 2003

Very nice writing!
Shy

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on January 1, 2003

so good and so true....

Reviewed by Kevin Whitworth

Reviewed on January 1, 2003

There is no revision necessary. This is a very moving poem. I've been in th exact state you've communicated to your readers. nice.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

Very moving.

Reviewed by John Valentino (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

Very nice feelings from this~

John

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

12-31-02

Without Dream's You Have Nothing,i.e. as Your
Just Reward's Are Not In Of This Physical World!!

Thanks Your Comments!

TRASK

Reviewed by Lindsay Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

I thank you, Lori, for writing something I could so perfectly relate to. It does seem strange how memories erase the negative when caught up in a moment of longing...
I deal with that issue so regularly, its comforting that I'm not alone in this!
Beautiful work
-Lindsay

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

Wow! An Orchestra of words swept me up and I lost a few moments of Real time there, lost in the music...even my kid talking in my ear didn't rouse my euphoria!! Whew, thank you, Lori, this is exquisite and dreamy.

Erin
:)

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

I wish my final drafts were as good as your first drafts.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

Another moving, intense write...beautiful expression.
Happy New Year, Lori--I hope this year is the year your hopes are fulfilled.

Reviewed by Monty Aspromonte (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

What a beautiful word dance! You take the moment, add the word, mix in the mournful, bewitching sounds of truth and reality and you have created a "Memories Masterpiece". You are truly a lady for not giving my secret away. You be cool! Thank you! I needed another avenue in which to vent. Skeeter says good morning too. Monty.

Reviewed by erica

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

perfect write

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2002

Lori this is perfect. Wow. It needs no revision ... in fact to revise might detract from the wonderful poem. You are so ddep in this one. Really are Lady. yes you are.
Bill Murray

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

Wonderful Write ...

Happy New Year Lori
~Sanil

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

the canvas you paint is beautiful! really like it ;)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

Beautiful write!
Jack

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

Beautiful, wonderfully done.
In Christs Love
~Michelle~