What uncertain demons tug harslhy upon that rope of thought seeped in despair and sadness...where once the sunflower strained endlessly to the heavens of your mind? The thorns of suffering have scratched open wounds upon your fair flesh and yet your heart struggles to the surface of the inundating fears we all have experienced deep down inside our souls. The last line..."you win again...I walk away" pronounces that pain and the recourse of reality.
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Amor
better to dream alone
than stuck in a broken one
better to be alone
than lonely together
better to make present past
than trapped in bad weather
some times walkiing away is relief
As always Melissa , your verse is powerful and beautifully written.
I hope if it's personal and you have to walk away, keep that head up and know you are worth much more than any fool who is too ignorant to listen.
You will eventually find how free you are...really. Whether our "Alone" is by a walk-out or death, we do survive. And if you find you are often talking to yourself, enjoy the moment...might be the best conversations you have...LOL...Sprit UP, girl; strong voiced verse!
Wow, I can really relate to this, Melissa. After years of struggle...when walking away would have been excruciatingly difficult.... the time is now right to walk away and it is now so freeing to be walking away from battles best left unfought.
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Amor
Sublime poetic write ... exceptional; outstanding!!
Blessings,
Robert
than stuck in a broken one
better to be alone
than lonely together
better to make present past
than trapped in bad weather
some times walkiing away is relief
your poem is excellent written
captivating poem!
One is the lonliest number (Three Dog Night)
Walk on, walk on with Hope in your heart
and you'll never walk alone.
Blessings,
Joseph
I hope if it's personal and you have to walk away, keep that head up and know you are worth much more than any fool who is too ignorant to listen.
Love
Eileen
Micke
Very nice job.
Paul;-]
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