UNRAVEling......... (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 15, 2008

Hmmm.. this is deeply written and felt Crissa!
Write On!
Love the display in colors, and the thread being ONE single color! Unique idea!
I can FEEL this! NOW! glad I gravitated to it! What a gem to be savored!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxoo

STay Positive!
Stay STrong!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by S D

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Crissa, I love 'unraveling'. In its simplicity it made me think of all the times I could have come unraveled if Gods Grace were not sufficient. WHat it does not say is what speaks so loudly. thank you for that. SyD

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Think the last couple days have tugged on mine to the point that. . .h e l. . .-p?

Love this!

Bout Unwound

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Kittens just love that lose threads...me too.
A genial little one.
Georg

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

I know that feeling all to well, but I keep mine taped down in the hopes that it never completely unravels. And, it is working. Thank God!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

I hear you and agree. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Cute and very creative....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Cryssa, I love this!

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

...thoughts...perhaps what seams...misspelled...can be repaired.
well done Cryssa...
John

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

just like one of my mums knitted school jumpers....

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

I love it. And I'm NOT taking the bate for your anglin'!! --Charlie

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Beautiful and complex in simplicity.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Kids getting to you?? Hope not; just take a deep breath, relax, and go slowly! Give those children lots of extra hugs, and in the meantime, take care of yourself, too! Very well penned; brava!

I can't imagine parenting 13 children!! WOW~! You are TRULY SuperMom!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and much respect!), your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Leo Durrant

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Hmmm, with 13 children, I'm surprised that thread hasn't been yanked all the way out.
Nice use of form and color. It's as if I'm looking at one of those spools of multi-colored yarn.
And perfectly stated.
Leo

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Cryssa,

Know that's true! Wrote one similar to this, called "s n a p." Excellent, love this one.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.