Beautiful Butterfly Boy (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

Great ethereal metaphor, Cryssa, that I can only echo in the words of those below. I suppose that you, like me, have seen a butterfly used as the metaphor for the resurrrection of Christ, altogether fitting in healing the spirit from such a wound.............Jerry

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on April 20, 2009

A beautiful and touching tribute.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Exquisite words and expression that tugs the heart and makes the eyes tear...Your poetry is a result of the tribulations you have learned to overcome with such womderful acceptance and faith,while maintaining a splendid attitude...Kudo's

love,
ET

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

A loving tribute to your infant son who journeyed to heaven. Its beautiful and when I read it ,I feel peaceful yet sadness touches the soul. I love the comparrisons.Blessings to you and yours .....M

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Dear Cryssa, Your poem is nice and touch my heart. It remind me when I was 9 year old when my mom lost a mbaby girl then a baby boy, I loved them both and at night I cried for them,I didn't stop thinking about every night only after I maried and had a doughther and a Boy which I geve them their name I became tranquil

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on April 15, 2009

Cryssa - Love the title and the metaphor- so appropriate and touching. - David

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 15, 2009

So beautifully expressed that no words from me will do this justice. So I just "say" thank you for sharing, Cryssa. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 15, 2009

Yes he is with the Lord and that gives you hope even in sadness.
A loving, skillfully written memoir for your little angel.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

The heartache and pain are there for the reader to not only read, but feel. How beautifully you've expressed this, Cryssa.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

so beautiful and incredibly touching and emotional!

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Ethereal yet real, like the deep feeling.

Axilea

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

So precious a tribute to a wee boy from his adoring Mom. Many hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

One of such pain and heartache, an emptiness in the soul that nothing can quench, yet a spirited revival of hope and renewal that bring this full circle into loving arms...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Sad but your everlasting love is evident and inspiring. Liz

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Sad, yet, a deep conviction behind the words.
Of course, that butterfly boy is doing it in Heavens.

Georg

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Cryssa, the title alone is irresistible. This is very heart breaking, did this just happen? I am so sorry for your loss...what a perfect butterfly love!

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Cryssa... sometimes we go through our lives and some memories will just never go away...this is one of those butterfly moments that you will always treasure...Thing is...as difficult as it was/is....God has this little butterfly close to him...what a gift you gave to Our Lord! hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

So Sad but he is in heaven watching over you every minute of the day.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

So beautiful, yet so sad! I am so sorry you've had to go through this! My prayers are with you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Cryssa -

Undone by the beauty, the sadness, and the hope in these lines - you've left me in tears -

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

That sucked the breath out of me and gave it back again. Oh Cryssa, God bless you for sharing this. Be well, Kathy