If You Could See (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 12, 2009

Wow... this is such a powerful writing, and done with such excellence. I do believe however, it is written with such beauty, because you are my loving friend, and you feel and understand my pain as well as I do yours... I missed this poem for some reason, and just discovered it this morning....perhaps God led me to find it days later, so that I could also read the other comments/reviews...it brings it all into a more clear photo in my mind...and I value those who understood my pain, as well as the pain that I must surely have inflicted on someone without realizing it... We must watch our words...and I suppose it's never too late... Thank you for this beautiful poem...I am so honored...and I will treasure this... it says so much more than you may ever realize... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 11, 2009

very creative and absolutely beautiful poetry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 8, 2009

Thank you for sharing Cryssa, we need the reminder and it helps when it's from someone who writes as well as you...Thinking twice is not hard to do,and can keep us from being cruel...Love,ET

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on May 8, 2009

Very powerful indeed. You wrote this in a very unique style and it added to the message.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on May 7, 2009

How utterly, perfectly true...Such power in words...!

Excellent as always Cryssa...Hugs, Diana

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on May 7, 2009

This is very beautiful,I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

Oh yes, words do have meaning, therefore to be chosen carefully. Very wise....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

Excellent message Crysaa, but I really like the way you've composed and typeset this poem. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

Your poem and insights are certainly true and well-done, Cryssa, and you are the best of friends to have. I went to see Linda's blog after reading you first. You always care whether it's the hurt of an orphan's deprivation, or the cruelty of ill-thought-out words. You are a gem..........Jerry

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

Beautiful write, Cryssa; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 6, 2009

"A dagger hasn't the power to go deeper than an unkind word" by Georg E Mateos

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

Cryssa, there is so much truth to choosing words carefully...because once said...no matter how sorry we are or how much regret we may feel....they can't be taken back. And then there are those words which are spoken at the right moment that can heal the heart. Lovely write.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

well said--we should choose our words--spoken or written--carefully, there is much power in words

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

You are so right, Cryssa. Words can be like a balm but they can also hurt like shrapnel. Very well-expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

Cryssa, what a lovely reminder of the power of words. I read Linda's blog as well and my heart went out to her. I think we have all shared similar experiences.

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

Dear Cryssa, Oh! dear friend, it says: "In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with GOD....". If everyone would respect the word, life would be great among human beings. Love emile

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

Right on. It is funny isn't it that we both speak today of the power of words. Well said my friend, and thank you for your review of mine. God Bless, J'nia