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Sometimes It Hits Me Like That
by Cryssa C → (All Poetry by Cryssa C)
Thursday, May 14, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Thinking of you on your birthday, Mom...

Sometimes it hits me like that…
like a slug to the belly
or a punch to the gut

You would think
I’d remember
after so many years

But minds play tricks
to fool us
to keep our breathing even

It’s her recipes that trip me up
(the Chinese sweet and sour ones)
that give the old Kung Fu

Those measurements of vagueness
make me think to call,
but as I reach…

It hits me then--
(that double-me-over ache)
She isn’t there to answer.

 


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 Reviews of "Sometimes It Hits Me Like That"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 18, 2015
This one really hits the Mark for me too...
Was my Mum's birthday on the 6th...
I recognise that feeling you describe only too well...
Hugs,
Diana...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 15, 2015
You reach depths of loving in such an effective and perfectly understated way.
I miss mine too and it comes on suddenly, like a refrain that surges, an inward clarity of absence that hits you just as you need her.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 15, 2015
This one has a double whammy. A dish with a deep regret. Quite enticing, actually, in a sad sort of way.

Ron

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on May 14, 2015
Hi Cryssa a nice poem. Love Emile

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 14, 2015
Ahhh . . . Yeah, that is definitely one of "those" moments that can promote tears in your eyes.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 14, 2015
Yes. And isn't it interesting that your body knows a date better than your cognitive brain? I mean, I feel so orphaned--like something's missing, and then it hits me too. It's Mom's birthday. Happy Birthday, Mom! I think I'm going to plant something in her honor today.
Lots of love, Charlie


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