Dana, this touched my heart. Simultaneously it speaks of connection and loss. Love and loss. You have set up a story here that the poem completes but I could see it becoming a love story as well. I feel every word is needed and enhances the poem but I love the last part the best. "Follow you path, I'll follow mine, and all souls meet-in the end. So wonderful. Be well, Kathy
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