bravery comes in small packages as well as large -- on foreign soil or the lot next door -- heroes know no bounds -- this is a wonderful story Bonnie -- saddle the horse of great joy and ride to the place where love and peace await -- JMW
A great ending to a great story.Sometimes I always ask myself why do people do these things to children and it seems that I will never know the answer to that question.Children are much more smarter than we adults give them credit for,but they have that innocence that can make any sicko do manipulative things and we have to teach our children to be careful and never talk to strangers.take care
A frightening tale... for parents as well as for children involved. And yes, Bonnie. You are very right. The bravery and courage of little children often puts our adult feeble attempts to shame. It's not just their inbuilt do-or-dare, or their lack of self-awareness. It is an integrity to do the needful thing which often, as grown-ups, we shy away from. Heart-stopping story. TY Kate xx
But where was the mother at all that time, when she let her kids be by themselves at the lake after dark? It sure wasn't Central Park in New York or your poem would had a radically different ending!
I think you could write a little parental guilt into the next one of these, for not even going with her son find the other son. So what's the moral here, Bonnie May?
In my neighborhood, neither kid would come back alive, and the mother would be in jail. We hear about the tragic results of this un-parental behavior on the news and the cop shows all the time. This a sad commentary on contemporary life. Thanks for bringing this to our attention.
Wonderful story. I finally realized that you tell stories in poem...instead of just writing poems... I cannot do that... you truly have a gift ... hugs, lindalaw
Every parents nightmare! A captivating write of reality...scary but it's happened many times....glad this one had a happy ending and glad it was just a dream, but a dream that cause a child to be more alert and cautious...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
The Commander and the Chief take on the rogue Deep State: the Gunfight at the UK Corral, missing Redcoats in the Nevada Triangle, and nuclear blackmail!
A young man’s need for respect and his search for love enables him to be coerced into becoming an undercover cop. Follow this man to see how others see him and try to understand why the job he becomes obsessed with and his quest for love, tear him ap
Love, romance, innocence, intrigue, danger, and lust. Life is complicated, and love even more so. Life, and love, can be hazardous to a lady's health. Especially if she's fallen in love with a married pop star.
Edwin
In Christs Love
Michelle~
TRASK
A poem with a heart Bonnie May.
But where was the mother at all that time, when she let her kids be by themselves at the lake after dark? It sure wasn't Central Park in New York or your poem would had a radically different ending!
I think you could write a little parental guilt into the next one of these, for not even going with her son find the other son. So what's the moral here, Bonnie May?
In my neighborhood, neither kid would come back alive, and the mother would be in jail. We hear about the tragic results of this un-parental behavior on the news and the cop shows all the time. This a sad commentary on contemporary life. Thanks for bringing this to our attention.
Rockie Coppolella
Be always safe,
Karen
Connie
fee
You are a 'messenger' for all . . . wonderful!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance
So chilling! What horrible things could have happened had that little boy not conquered his fears. Excellent Bonnie!
Mary
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Another happy ending
Georg
PS: The world needs more stories like this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Blessings,
Joyce B.