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Cupid’s Love Potion #9
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Oh he means business this time...


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Cupid’s Love Potion #9

 

Cupid’s very busy dipping his arrows in the love potion #9.

He used a very power batch this year so it would mightily bind.

There are two lonely hearts that are lost and can not go on alone.

Both had been badly broken very long-ago and can not atone.

 

Both had stopped reaching out to anyone for fear of being hurt.

They close up on outstretched hands, seeming a little curt.

So our little Cupid has a difficult task ahead of him to fight.

But he knows if the batch is strong enough, it will be alright.

 

His first shot goes into the man that once dreamed of love so bad.

He gave so much of himself to someone when he was but a lad.

But she took all he had to give, his kindness, love and trust.

Then she stomped on his loving heart, until it almost bust.

 

So he was a definite challenge for our little Cupid guy.

But off went little Cupid’s arrow, up into the sky.

It hit its mark immediately, right into this man’s heart.

This man smiled at woman sitting there, because of a little dart.

 

But the woman sitting there also had a badly damaged heart.

So she wasn’t interested in this smile and showed it from the start.

She turned away from his loving smile but it almost made her break.

For this was something she had to do for her broken hearted sake.

 

This didn’t discourage Cupid, he prepared for such an act.

Off went another arrow into her heart where he found a  little crack.

She looked stunned at first but the powerful potion finally took its hold.

She suddenly turned around and smiled her heart no longer cold.

 

Two hearts were joined that day, in a beautiful tender way.

Both hearts mended instantaneously & Cupid had a glorious day.

 

Written by,

Bonnie May

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Cupid’s Love Potion #9"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
I bet that made Cupid's day!
Cryssa

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Fantasies and dreams and I have MACE!!!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Then again, he use on himself that Jersey Chanél # 5

Georg


Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 18, 2009
Really nice poem...and sure happy it ends Forever After for a change!! Nice when it does happen to you too... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on January 18, 2009
Ah, a happy ending at last! Thanks Bonnie for explaining how to mend the broken-hearted. Alas, if were that easy for us all. A fantastic poem of love to coax us shy, faint-hearted lovers back into the real-world again. Now where is that little devil aiming at today? Be careful, it might be you!

Rockie Coppolella

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 18, 2009
if there is one characteristic I admire above almost all others, it is a great sense of humor -- and you dear Bonnie, have a great sense of humor -- thanks for sharing your cupidon tale with with us -- an enjoyable read -- may peace and love bring you joy -- JMW

Reviewed on January 18, 2009
Bonnie~!

ROTF after reading this - you have a great sense of humor!! FABULOUS!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on January 18, 2009
LOL, Bonnie, I need a shot by him. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2009
I think this is a delightful Valentine story-poem, and I also think you should send it to Marcia for the TWF Valentine's Day page. Neat one, Bonnie.

Ted

Reviewed on January 18, 2009
Great write, Bonnie, as always; a joy to read/review you! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I don't know why, but Cupid reminds me a little of my big, strong daddy! LOL I guess that's what daddy would look like wearing a pink wig on his head! LOL

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 18, 2009
Hooray for Cupid, but he sure looks different than I remember him!


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