The Edge (poem) by Tracey L Hardie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2002

Very powerful. I know this feeling so well. How welcome the idea of goiing over the edge can become.Thanx for the image.
Drkman

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

Yes this is a very very powerful poem! Bill

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on June 24, 2002

I do know the feeling, PERFECT Tracey, you're wonderful, don't forget. :) Janet xoxoxoxoxoxo

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

like this powerful poem...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Noooope!!!!! Don't let yourself be pushed around!!!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Great write. A "free fall to freedom." Great line!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Wow that's tellin em!!! I just love gut poems. Hope all is well.
Josie

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Don't wait for the ass to push you, JUMP!!! Lol.

Scada

Reviewed by angel michael (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Tracey....let he/she push you.....for really there is no ledge in your heart when you knew where the cliff lie...

~~michael~~

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Strong write--like the ending, especially!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Beautifully done Tracey...I love to see you have that freedom...to do anything you wish
Amor

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Hi Tracey,
Does this mean you are annoyed with some one,
I thought those beauty pills were starting to work.
nice emotional poem liked it.
Morchuis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

heartfelt emotional write...be free...;-)

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Sorry Tracey I will try to be more understanding but did you have to let everyone know about our personal business.
How about tonight I cook???

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

hell, can i push you
and catch you too?
you look good pissed babe

good luck in the dance you are in

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

the beast can push you off your perch.

Reviewed by Samantha Kennedy (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Once more
I feel pushed to the edge,
teetering,
waiting on the final shove.

....great write

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Good write...emotional.