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Escape
by Shedding Light → (All Poetry by Shedding Light)
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This is dedicated to the great numbers of people who feel trapped in a very chaotic world.
Yesterday has come and gone, tomorrow is so near. We have so many problems, so many things to fear. 9/11 shook the world, we tremble like a leaf. It was the manifestation of Osama Bin Laden's beef. The chaos has us all stirred up, all the stress and strife. We haven't been so shook up since O.J. killed his wife. We wonder how they let him go, some say he had finesse. It only proves our judicial system is a filthy mess. The world has many troubled spots, five dollars i'm a bettin', that Israel and Palestine's the cause of Armageddon. The Christians are a praisin' God; Jews waiting on Messiah. I just try to escape all this, and listen to Mariah. I seem to find relaxation in her soothing voice. When it comes to relieving stress, her songs are my choice. Copyright 1/23/08 Library of Congress registration All rights reserved

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 10, 2009

GOOD WRITE WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT STRONGLY SUPPORT YOUR THEME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

SWEET! Maria is soothing and she speaks of honesty!
as your poem did for me!
Sad to know, so much around us causes whoa...
WE must hang in, better days ARE coming!

STay Positive! I love your style of writing Harold!
WRITE ON1
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

The thing is the more youthink about your problems, the more they seem to persist...you become what you think.

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

serious with a spoonful of humor...I like it. Mariah does get me going...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Very observant as to the ills of the world, an interesting way to clear the head....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

...well written poetic thoughts...different escapes...perhaps ones own cave...in which to escape...peaceful music...soul found within.
well done Harold...
John