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When the Bough Breaks
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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Wind edges in, rushing twigs and branches
enough that more leaves are forced to let go.
Lying on my back, I cringe as more bodies
sway and tack.   Sail down, sail down
to join the fallen.   Many comrades brown.
So many pile, what is one?   Except. . .
unless. . .you’re a leaf?   Suddenly see wrens
bombed from their nests and marched to a front.
See how they fall.  See how they fall.  Shriek
of ever-building winds once again hobbles
wings and limbs.  Binds them to sides and heads,
sends them out in the cold.  Leaves, knowing
they may be too battered to hang on.  Fought
too hard and too long.  So many fall
right off  that  others lose their footing
or get so sad and muddled, they can’t lift.
Too-often-soaked, too-often-starved-and-thirsting,
too-often-robbed-of-friends.  Gun-crack/ratatat-
deaf and phosphorous-blind, cannot recognize
their own flesh.  Every bone aches, and the down
that is supposed to protect sweats to a mat,
scabs away.   What choice but to give up.
Succumb to fatigue.   So many are going -- know
they are going -- to die.     After all, other bodies
got piled or lost before their season.  Other bodies
did not have time to drift, but were ripped to shreds
in place.  Not a feather to be seen.  Happens as we lie.
Others, weapons rained fire on – are raining on --
until they were knocked off – are knocked off  – or
broke.    Break,  leaving minds free to contemplate
the cost.  Work at recalling those for whom crosses
raise and flags fold, but who like the leaves,
some would have us ignore.  
This particular show is over.   Better get up.
Do something.


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 Reviews of "When the Bough Breaks"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Blimey. Very powerful metaphors..

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2005
Wonderful !

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2005
Fine works!!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 18, 2005
Powerful in the extreme when forced to think about these issues through the exact medium of your metaphor, Pea. Like how we don't think about the nursery rhyme's intent in the first place. A stark and resonant wake-up call that drums the reality home afresh, as it should be, by putting the facts into a different, more pastoral setting. Man truly is a beast. Thanks for this way of setting my sights afresh.... again... LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2005
Overwhelmed by this piece..exceptional write!


vesna:)

Reviewed on November 18, 2005
WOW! Great write, Pea; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2005
Oh my goodness This one has me in Tears. sad sad . So beautifully written. A very Beautiful Tribute.
Tracey 42xoox(c :)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 17, 2005
Pea! This piece is an explosion of emotion pricking imagery that hurls the reader out then draws her back into a lazy river where she drifts along watching heart-wrenching war scenes played out before her along shadowy banks. Powerful allusions. Very well done.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Gripping, Pea. Very well done.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Kathy Kubik
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
The title is a striking contrast to the subject matter, yet it is a lullaby of sorts, isn't it? Love, love, love the strong voice here that screams get up, do something.

Kathy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Extremely powerful write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Phyllis,

Very sad and powerful write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Your metaphor is spot-on and the poem, well what can I say pea!
A fine write for a sorry subject!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
This is a striking poem and I read it twice savoring the images and comparisons you have made in it.

Felix

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Beautiful tribute. R

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Yeah. Good stuff on the literal and metaphoric level.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Most powerful offering Pea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Brilliant POetic Mulch scribed as seasonal tribute to Veterans and nature. Limbs severed and turned to dust, buried and forgotten.

It would seem to me that as compassionate humans mandatory, to take the time to honor both the fallen Veterans and wind-blown leaves, for the protection they have given us. The parks, the cemeteries, small-town America, metropolis, and Skylar crossroads. One line does it all for me in this poem, "Suddenly see wrens bombed from their nests and marched to a front." Analogy is so apparent in this ... just say the title "When the Bough Breaks." Enough said. Thank you, my glitterati friend, Pea!

Sage

Reviewed on November 16, 2005
Pea,

Tears are rolling down my face--O, what a powerful, powerful write you've penned in tribute to those who have paid the ultimate sacrifice--visually stunning, the comparison to storm tossed birds is brilliant. Thank you, dear friend, for remembering our veterans. As a former medic in the United States Air Force, I salute you.

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.


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