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Miles Dissolve, and Oceans
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          Miles Dissolve, and Oceans
 
‘See me plunk in front of my monitor?  See
you! You’re in Africa/Australia/Toronto/
Korea/Oahu.  Venice? Pa-ree?   Rome-Rio-
Heidelberg-Brussels-Great Britain, OneHorse,
USA?  Chi’, Seattle, N’Awlins, the Apple!  
No end to the hearts and minds on the ‘Net!
Put your specs on, that’s it.  Don’t need ‘em?
Lucky sod.  Forget all that and click to me,
while I click to you.  Watch our world grow
even more.  Something about quietly sitting
in the glow of a screen that reflects feelings
cannot be said.  Makes us believe – no, know --
we can join souls.  Not about sex, is it?
About homing in on who we are.  Where we
are coming from, what we give, what we try.
What makes us happy and how much we hurt,
and why.  Whether we are working to create
better selves from the debris Life’s bolts
leave, even though we sometimes hunker
down and pad our shells with wet sand.
Keys fly when we let ourselves show-me-
show-you.  Bodies not required!  Meeting
unnecessary, no need to “press the flesh.”
Where romance is our object, helps more
than hurts to look deep.  Not be distracted
by cut, color, style. Tics, pecadilloes, shyness,
or showmanship. Legs straight?  Bowed?
Rendered inert or gone?  Some of us point
to type, some rely on other devices.  Physical
scars?  All got some inside.  Dimples?
Accidents of birth.  Tattoos?  Not original
equipment.  Height important in basketball.
Got our our will-o’-the-wisps, our fireplugs.
Little people, Goliaths, rolypoles.  Ah-nold
six-pack and pecs, or along the lines of Pooh.  
Marks on a wall, ho-hum.   Endomorph,
ectomorph, who remembers all the morphs?  
Peel  away the crust and show us the center.
Let us feel if it is warm.   Smell the yeast, see
if it is soft to the touch, but not too.  Not being
picky, just connecting.  Your feet, will they
be “stickin’ up out’ the casket?” ala Eubie
Blake’s rollicking tune?  So be!  As for hair:
lank, sprayed, rug, plugs, curls, spikes, plaits,
braids, comb-over, no sweat.  Lips and breasts
fatten or shrink.  Penises.  Brows tweeze, pencil,
tat, shave.  Point. What gets us to the core?
Lenses gloss or magnify.   Light tends to shift.
But when we write, the crust falls away.
Then we know.

 

(c) Phyllis Jean Green,  September, 2007


 
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 Reviews of "Miles Dissolve, and Oceans"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
So profound. And yes, when we write the crust falls away and true beauty is usually the result. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Great offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
This is such a creative way to reach out to the hearts and souls of others across the many miles. A masterpiece of delight and truth...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Beautifully written and expressed thoughts
Your words captured such vividness and flow,Imagery
Yes with this new age of computers
You can talk and make friends miles and oceans
And to the whole world but is also very dangers too!!
Excellent writing!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Oh, so truthful...we can sit in front of our computers and talk to the world and be as entertained as we can be and become friends with wonderful people. A lot of honesty in this writing...love it!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
You penned a milestone of a poem...
and there is the Ocean of humanity
I enjoyed it Pea!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Within seconds, anyone with access to this vast connection, to touch with their fingertips, the SO many different souls, has advantage to do it, Unconditionally. . .
I believe we have an advantage!

"Miles Dissolve, and Oceans", gives one food for thought on, just how much, we really, really do share and why. . .and how, and why, and what and where. . .and why some more.
To love unconditionally, was always much more difficult. . .but in order to survive somehow, we must learn it.
I would like to think God has this all under control!
ANOTHER FANTABULOUS PEN!
:)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
This is so true, Pea. It is really about who we are and not about the genetic challenges or atributes we have. Humans are a visual lot and too often the prize is passed up because of the wrapper. Excellent message and pen.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Every word of this is just a link in the unendying truth of the written word and when most of our dismal life's are peeled back you see a crust forming that in unpalatable without the mask of civilization . . . gotta love it, my friend, gotta love it . . . You received two (2) gotta love it . . . that is an accomplishment . . .

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Pea this is exceptional! You capture it all so well, and end with the truth of the pen and word, which is the weapon mightier than the sword!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Well done dear friend, I have found that many times when I sit down with my laptop in hand, and begin to write, read, and share my thoughts with others whom have similar interests that I tend to forget many of the cares that this world has a way of inflicting upon us. I also find that on many occasions I count my blessings after reading of others troubles and trials my own doesn't seem as bad. When I am overwhelmed with the load of the week, I can sit down and read at the den...and I don't seem quite as overloaded! A wonderful write my friend...one of my favorite thus far. You've penned a powerful and thought provoking write! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on September 30, 2007
(((Pea))),

See me plunk *I love that word* in front of my monitor? I see you, all the way in CaroLINa! I see the soul of a wonderful poet opening as big as Texas, sharing her world to embrace mine, to enrich me with love and poetry. This is my new favorite of yours--ab-so-lute-ly!!!!!!! Well done, yes.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Having internet is an asset to some, who has nobody to talk to. Entering into a virtual world everything is possible by only the creation of our pens and hands. What more could one ask for? It's a form of self-therapy for many, for when they're online they forget all their troubles, even old people with arthritis struggle to get obline to write. This alone shows you what kind o therapy it is.

It's a self-therapy, not an addiction.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
but when we write, the crust falls away-beautifully penned write-so very true and poignant


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