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Thread of Sorrow
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Silvered light fences with the clouds
in an intermittent battle of rain and shine
A Japanese elm becomes a geisha
stripping leaves upon winter’s eve
in a silent dance of sensual waiting
as if to arouse the hazy blue-gray sky
ultimately breaking the thread of sorrow
Finch and Robin take to the evergreen
their songs muted by the brittle frost
…and memories of you begin to thaw

The wind cries in crazed spiral gestures
bending limbs with a horizontal rage
The soil is a soup of twigs and leaves
infused with the fresh tears of heaven
Today, yesterday blends with tomorrow
and the reflections slowly fade away
revealing the changes of passing time
The snows melt from once shaded cliffs
as the sun probes with ardent fingers
…and memories of you find a way home

© 2003 Amor Sabor

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 Reviews of "Thread of Sorrow"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
' The wind cries....' 'And memories of you find a way home' Beautiful, I love this. Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Beautiful, simply beautiful!

Deborah :o))

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on January 29, 2004
Beautiful and stunning images, Amor! Stirring rhythm.
*The snows melt from once shaded cliffs
as the sun probes with ardent fingers
…and memories of you find a way home*
Beautiful! Thanks so much for sharing the pictures in your mind!

Peace.




Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2004
Glorious imagery here. Congratulations, Amor Sabor. Tu poesia lleva un sabor muy rico.

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Amor,
This is absolutely stunning poetry; beautifully penned!

Congratulations on your win!

Love, Sheila


Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Such beautifully articulated imagery...wonderfully done.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Congrats Amor!! I love the poem, esp. this,
A Japanese elm becomes a geisha
stripping leaves upon winter’s eve
in a silent dance of sensual waiting
as if to arouse the hazy blue-gray sky
ultimately breaking the thread of sorrow

Again, Congratulations my friend.
Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Congratulations Amor! This deserved to win... it manages to be ethereal, yet solidly earthy at the same time, with lovely descriptive lines.

All the best,

Sara (still posting from hospital cyber cafe)

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Awesome prose, awesome descriptions, mesmerizing scene painting!

Reviewed by joanne buchanan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Oh my goodness Amor..This is incredably beautiful poetry like I have NEVER seen..Congratulations!!!!The dynamics of your art form leave me breathless!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace
&
Love
Dove

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
What got me Amor, and took my breath to "ahh" was the line:
The soil is a soup of twigs and leaves infused with the fresh tears of heaven. . .

I rest my case, and a statue needs to be built in honor of your muse.
blessin's and many MANY congratulations,

cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
CONGRATULATIONS Amor....I wasn't on the week of Christmas and I missed this lovely poem...wonderful imagery...you surely do deserve the win....floria

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
Beautiful Amor,.... love the imagery...hugs!

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Vivid images and excellent writing!

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Wonderful imageries and great choice of words!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Amor,
The imagery and metaphors in this are second to none. I love the feel of this. Wow, it leaves me breathless, wanting more.

Tami

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Your eyes see far beyond the normal humdrum and go to the core of life.......

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Amor, I've missed your work tremendously. It's always nice to come back and read the good stuff that you missed like a belated gift:)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
Your imagery is wonderful, especially the comparison of the tree to a geisha, I thought that was brilliant.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Hey Amor:

excellent write...gem of a write....lovely!!!!!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Happy New Year, one of your best.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Very vivid...

Thanks for the share,
Rodd

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Incredible imagery, gorgeous poem, Amor, Happy New year to you and your family.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Beautiful poetry! Bravo!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
…and memories of you find a way home

Glorious visuals..indeed a Master Poet at work...ty

vesna :)

h....ave a wondrous New Year!!!.... and may only good come your way!!!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 28, 2003
Excelllent imagery!!!
so vivid and the verses beautiful

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
OUTSTANDING imagery excellent read.
Amor

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Superb imagery and emotions expressed. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Beautiful expressions in the verses.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Great imagery!

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Another awesome write Amor! You have wowed me again!

Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Beautiful write, Amor! Thanks for sharing; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Thread of Sorrow it may be... but Thread of Amazing Beauty, sad, nostalgic, deeply emotive, it most certainly is, dear Amor. This poem, I inhaled deeply, and tears welled up in my eyes, straight from the soul...
Infinite Blessings,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
lovely work

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
This is incredibly visual, powerful, excellent writing, Amor! ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
This is exceptionally well done. I'm impressed.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Amor,
This is beautiful the imagery is some of your best..
Happy Holidays and blessings to you and the family
HUGS
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Powerful descriptive write Amor!!


Happy New year Dear One!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Thanks for the great images Amor
Happy Holidays!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
gifted imagery!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Such beautifully expressed woe,vivid visuals, deeply felt poetry.

Reviewed on December 26, 2003
This was beautiful, I loved the imagery here, outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed on December 26, 2003
Hi Amor:

This is so descriptive and the imagery dance inside my head. I love this.

Happy Holidays to you!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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