Silvered light fences with the clouds
in an intermittent battle of rain and shine
A Japanese elm becomes a geisha
stripping leaves upon winter’s eve
in a silent dance of sensual waiting
as if to arouse the hazy blue-gray sky
ultimately breaking the thread of sorrow
Finch and Robin take to the evergreen
their songs muted by the brittle frost
…and memories of you begin to thaw
The wind cries in crazed spiral gestures
bending limbs with a horizontal rage
The soil is a soup of twigs and leaves
infused with the fresh tears of heaven
Today, yesterday blends with tomorrow
and the reflections slowly fade away
revealing the changes of passing time
The snows melt from once shaded cliffs
as the sun probes with ardent fingers
…and memories of you find a way home
Beautiful and stunning images, Amor! Stirring rhythm.
*The snows melt from once shaded cliffs
as the sun probes with ardent fingers
…and memories of you find a way home*
Beautiful! Thanks so much for sharing the pictures in your mind!
Peace.
Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2004
Glorious imagery here. Congratulations, Amor Sabor. Tu poesia lleva un sabor muy rico.
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Amor,
This is absolutely stunning poetry; beautifully penned!
Congrats Amor!! I love the poem, esp. this,
A Japanese elm becomes a geisha
stripping leaves upon winter’s eve
in a silent dance of sensual waiting
as if to arouse the hazy blue-gray sky
ultimately breaking the thread of sorrow
Again, Congratulations my friend.
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Congratulations Amor! This deserved to win... it manages to be ethereal, yet solidly earthy at the same time, with lovely descriptive lines.
All the best,
Sara (still posting from hospital cyber cafe)
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Awesome prose, awesome descriptions, mesmerizing scene painting!
Reviewed by joanne buchanan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Oh my goodness Amor..This is incredably beautiful poetry like I have NEVER seen..Congratulations!!!!The dynamics of your art form leave me breathless!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thread of Sorrow it may be... but Thread of Amazing Beauty, sad, nostalgic, deeply emotive, it most certainly is, dear Amor. This poem, I inhaled deeply, and tears welled up in my eyes, straight from the soul...
Infinite Blessings,
~Alexandra~
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*The snows melt from once shaded cliffs
as the sun probes with ardent fingers
…and memories of you find a way home*
Beautiful! Thanks so much for sharing the pictures in your mind!
Peace.
This is absolutely stunning poetry; beautifully penned!
Congratulations on your win!
Love, Sheila
A Japanese elm becomes a geisha
stripping leaves upon winter’s eve
in a silent dance of sensual waiting
as if to arouse the hazy blue-gray sky
ultimately breaking the thread of sorrow
Again, Congratulations my friend.
Love, Janet xoxoxo
All the best,
Sara (still posting from hospital cyber cafe)
Peace
&
Love
Dove
The soil is a soup of twigs and leaves infused with the fresh tears of heaven. . .
I rest my case, and a statue needs to be built in honor of your muse.
blessin's and many MANY congratulations,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
The imagery and metaphors in this are second to none. I love the feel of this. Wow, it leaves me breathless, wanting more.
Tami
excellent write...gem of a write....lovely!!!!!!
Thanks for the share,
Rodd
Glorious visuals..indeed a Master Poet at work...ty
vesna :)
h....ave a wondrous New Year!!!.... and may only good come your way!!!
so vivid and the verses beautiful
Amor
Infinite Blessings,
~Alexandra~
This is beautiful the imagery is some of your best..
Happy Holidays and blessings to you and the family
HUGS
Lady Peg
Happy New year Dear One!!
Love Tinka
Happy Holidays!
Reindeer
This is so descriptive and the imagery dance inside my head. I love this.
Happy Holidays to you!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)