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Haiku ..... 4th grade boys
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We are learning Haiku in Wynona Elementary, Wynona, Oklahoma.


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Dogs wag their tails fast
When they are super happy
It is like a kiss. 
-Josh 





December is cold
May is spring when its sunny
Snow flakes are too cold
-Bobby 





A warm time is spring
The coldest time every year
Snow is very cold

-Max







           

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 Reviews of "Haiku ..... 4th grade boys"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 24, 2016
CHILDREN ARE SO HONEST ABOUT FEELINGS AND TO THE POINT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
I admire anyone that can squeeze expression into so few syllables -
good job, my personal favorite is Josh's because I was recently kissed by a dog.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Those are VERY clever ku.
Great work, kids.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 29, 2006
Great to see kids learning Haiku
my grandson told me, he too is learning Haiku
at his school he's a natural
I'll have to post a deep poem he wrote last year.
thanks for sharing ..M J

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Wonderful! Well done, boys! Keep it up...Lin

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2006
thank you so much for sharing this with us. The animals lover in me enjoyed:

"Dogs wag their tails fast
When they are super happy
It is like a kiss.
-Josh "

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
What bright boys! And you are such a great teacher! Keep up the good work, guys!
Safi

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on February 20, 2006
Molly tell the boys they did very well. I like their haikus. I will not pick any one as a favorite, because they are all good. Give the boys a high five for me, Molly, they deserve it. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and all of your students, and those whom you love dearly, and be with you always, and at your side constntly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 20, 2006
My dog gives kisses
Wags his tail as well also
He likes reading these...Ed & rufuz

Reviewed on February 20, 2006
Molly,

These young men are wonderful; thanks for sharing their well crafted haikus with us! Future poets in the making for sure! BRAVO to the boys, and BRAVA to you for sharing them with us!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 20, 2006
Molly,

Love them all--give your kids a high-five and a hug. :) Well done! Josh's is tender; Bobby's waiting for warmer climes, I guess; and so is Max. *Got news for 'em...so am I, so am I! Now, I don't want the storms, but warmer temps, yes. :) *

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
Sorry I missed this one, Molly - and Josh definitely gets my vote here!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 17, 2006
Outstanding!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2006
Out of the bright minds of children. Wonderful stuff Molly.


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