MARCH: Lion & Lamb First Grade Diamante (poem) by m j . hollingshead on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on August 13, 2019

I love your poetry. I wish you would write them more often.

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on May 31, 2014

Terrific youthful poets

Reviewed by Frances Seymour

Reviewed on March 10, 2014

Outstanding descriptions from the mouths of babes. Love it!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on April 7, 2011

I'd probably flunk this test, mj, but high marks for
all nine students. I'd probably violate the rules and
write one about the lamb lying down with the lion. -gene.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 29, 2011

SO...GOOD! YOU ALL DID THIS VERY, VERY WELL! THANK YOU AND LOTS OF LOVE.

ATLANTA, GEORGIA

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

EACH AN OUTSTANDING OFFERING
THANKS FOR SHARING
LOVE & PEACE BE WITH YOU

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 25, 2011

Delightful! Student five tugged at my personal sense of humor and values. Though not one of them wrote with any trace of inferiority or mediocrity. Give them all a gold star for creativity. I bid you and the first grade, joy, peace and love my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Such power and energy in the language
of these buds;
range, aptness, form and insight.
Kudos!

John
Singapore

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Love them all...

Cheers to your young poets,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

What creative young poets!! I love these very much and thank you for sharing them!

Reviewed by Paul Kyriazi

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Hello everyone. I'm from Japan, but was born in San Francisco, California. And grew up in Pittsburg California. Can you find that little town on the map? It's near Concord and next to the river that goes out to the Golden Gate Bridge. Pittsburg is 40 miles east of San Francisco.

I like all those poems. One line I like is 'FLUFFY FARM WILD GOBBLE'. That's very poetic. I also like 'FLUFF PUFF WILD ROAR'. My favorite is student #9 with the line 'LAMB CUTE WARM' because I raised up a baby lamb when I was a boy. I give it milk from a bottle until he became a big sheep. So the words Lamb Cute Warm made me have that memory and made me feel good. But I liked all the poems with the good suject. Keep writing and learning good english, because writing is so fun and important for comunication.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

These are great! Congratulations on a fine literary effort and keep up the good work. Best wishes,

Regis Auffray (Chilliwack, British Columbia, Canada)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

These are all really great! It's wonderful that each differs from the other,even with the same words. Excellent work,students and teacher!;-)

Eileen
Roseville
California
(near Sacramento)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Another B-A-A-A-A-ING Good Job by Your First Graders, Molly. Truly Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Or is it the other way around?
God bless,
Lew