Haiku .... 4th grade girls (poem) by m j . hollingshead on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 17, 2011

GREAT HAIKUS...I ENJOYED THEM BECAUSE I COULD SEE WHAT YOU WERE WRITING ABOUT. THANK YOU.

JOYCE BELL
ATLANTA, GEORGIA

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2007

They are having an absolute ball doing this.
Love it!

Elizabeth

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

Obviously, you are a great teacher. Thanks for sharing and pass on my congratulations to your students. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 7, 2006

Children are so honest when they write. Thank you for sharing these with us!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 10, 2006

I am impressed by these girls. They put my Haiku to shame, probably because they see through open eyes. Beautiful!

Lin

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking

Reviewed on February 26, 2006

I love the one by Rix. I have a little girl who loves horses - she's going to her first girl scout horse camp this summer.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2006

Enjoyed all of them. This one touched my hearts,

"Horses
Running like the wind
With myself on the saddle
Trolloping through ponds
- Rix "

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2006

Love the expressions and the activities of this poems lines wonderful work!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 21, 2006

This was just wonderful Molly!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 21, 2006

Enchanting haiku, I remember writing my first one about that age...that is when my love affair with haiku began

Carole

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

Molly, these young writers are fantastic! So young, yet they have a firm grasp of the haiku form. Excellent; thanks for sharing these young ladies' works of art! Future poets in the making! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

Good show for the kids. Watch out, they'll start encroaching on your style before long. LOL

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

Molly, thank each and every one of the girls for writing these wonderful words. These lines that follow, from my poem Children, should be posted in every school classroom, public library, and where ever children gather.

"These times are for the children,
and they should not be forsaken to them,
for children should be children as long as they can."

Thnx for sharing Molly.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and each one of your students, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constntly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

And they are learning well, Molly - I think I like the first one the best, but a job well done by all these marvelous 4th graders.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Lovely haiku; creativity blooms in each young poet whose works you've shared; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Amazing what kids can do before we stamp them into the ground.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

the girls have done a fine job of it ...