If They Only Knew... (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

If, If, If, such as short word and when "only" is added it makes it more powerful. If you, If Only, If I, If we. To many if's for to many of the worlds problems. Thank you for careing Linda.

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

If only those in suffering would speak with God.
If only they could realize they're merely lifting the load from their own shoulders and passing the misery onto those left behind.
The unrelenting pain of guilt, anguish and despair makes for an unforgivable inheritance.

This is a great message, Linda. If only your words could be heard by those most in need. Even more, I wish there were no need for you to say these words that needed to be said.
Bless you,
Richard

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

What a powerful poem, Linda! It makes me
think - thought provoking poem! I hope you
are doing okay. It is nice to be back!
Becca

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 8, 2007

A beautiful poem Linda, caring and wise.

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on February 7, 2007

Powerful and beautiful.

Thank you,
Sharon

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

There's A Light At The End Of Tunnel,i.e. If You Look Without Your Eye's You Will See It-

Why The Meek (Weak) Will Inherit This Earth...

Most Excellently Done Linda...

Your True Friend, TRASK...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Linda,
it is so powerful this poem and for them so desperate, they have no hope and see no future and all they feel is the pain this one should be heard for those in need.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Enjoyed another powerful write by YOU! Love Holly

Reviewed by Guy Hogan

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

This poem hits home. In my youth I was close to the edge a couple of times myself.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Linda this is an amazing write here, I am thankful that you have shared this, I agree with Karla you may have saved lives today
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Powerful write, Linda; very well done! I have been there too, and God had His Hand on me; that is why I am still here! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

POWERFUL, Linda, you may have saved lives today in verse; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I've been there, but thank God, didn't follow through: and now I have everything to live for!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

It is our own time in that darkness that has taught us these lessons. You are honored today for the courage to hold on for just that moment more. Your poem will show a light for all that read. Lady J

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

If they only knew... Keep telling them, Linda; you do it very well.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Words of wisdom spoken here Linda!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

Years ago I took training in suicide intervention and I was appalled at the statistics and the ofthen seemingly inane reasons for taking such a drastic step. I did however come away from the training with a new sense that often all people really want is to know someone cares enough to reach out to them. I have heard the standard line that people who commit sucicide are looking for attention...maybe so but no more than a child drowning in waters over their head scream and wave their arms for someone to save them, would we turn our backs on them?
Anyway sorry if I got on soapbox there but your poem struck close to home and heart, thank you for reminding all.

Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 6, 2007

This is a wonderful message and needs to be broadcast far and wide, and hopefully your poem will find its way into many lives who need the life-saving communication that you've imparted.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

Oh what a write, what a subject, this is one that touches me deeply. We lost a young family member several years ago to suicide...she left behind a sad, sad note. She didn't see anyway out of a situation, other than the grave...such decieving lies that the devil inflicted her mind that this was her escape. If only she could have known the many tears and cries from her mother...such a sad write, but one that may fall in the hands of one who is contemplating such a deed...you've penned it well my dear friend. You were surely inspired to write this one!
Blessings,
Joyce B...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

Superb poem with wisdom message Linda! How we all wish it could be heeded! ET

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

A strong write,we do have options other than death.Thanks for sharing this sad but needed poem.
Michael

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

This is such a poignant write, that I had tears in my eyes!
Very well thought out and written, with a beautiful picture too.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on February 5, 2007

this is really wonderful linda-the reality of those moments when weakness is only strengthened by the knowledge of a new day, a family member counting on us, and the fact another kiss, hug, and smile are going to occur-as long as we hold on...

thank you,
Donna.