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Buried Alive!!!
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Buried Alive
Dirt crusted over me
I can feel its taste
Darkness decending
Someone help me
Someone find me
Before he comes back

Buried Alive
Fear as I've never known
As a coldness comes over me
Shadows in the night
Is it him
Has he come back for me
No, just the trees

Buried Alive
Death coming to swallow me
Screams won't come
Hard to breathe
Trembling in fear
Is that footsteps
No, just the leaves

Buried Alive
In the pit of swirling darkness
I ride the waves of pain
Dirt crushing me
Fear strangling me
Terror beyond belief
In the dusty mist of hell

© Linda Hill 2003


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 Reviews of "Buried Alive!!!"
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
that was awesomely dark and scary and chilling what a fatnastic poem of horror nice job on it

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Good Morning, Linda
This was an awesome write of the fear of enclosement. You captured so well. Thank You for your kindness.


yf
tony

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
WOW! Let me out of here! Chilling read, and fun to imagine!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
3-29-03

Excellent_

Literally Millions Upon Millions Of Humans Are Buried Alive In Sin,There Own Arrogance, Self Inequities,i.e. Greed__Ignorance...

TRASK

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Claustrophobics are coming out of the closet.
Sorry, a little humor so I can get to sleep tonight after this poem.
You truly captured horror.
Awesome job.
John

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
good write

very poe-esque

john+

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Ahhhh. Horribly good horror. No more chili before bedtime. [smiles]

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Linda, you gave a beautiful description of what someone feels like during this experience. And the picture you used spoke a thousand words. It made your poem so much better. You are coming up with a dark
side I never knew you had. But it is a brilliant poem.

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
*aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!* being claustrophobic, this one reaalllly got me...geez. creepy, dark, TERRIFYING write...well done *shivers* WILL YOU LET ME OUT NOW???? :0 ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. i promise i'll be good...

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Excellent Write...
Buried Alive!!!
bye

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Linda you have got me trembling here...good write..Floria

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I used to have dreams of being buried alive!!! Well done Linda.
Jack

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Oh so very dark and lovely! This was outstanding Linda!

Beautifully done,

Reindeer

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
*SHIVER ME TIMBERS* Linda, what a CHILLING write! Well done! Love, your (spooked) friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :0

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This one gives me the chills! Gruesome picture and perfect addition for the write.

Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Hi Linda,
One of the most terrifying fears...
Excellent write!

Hugs,
Allen



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