Dear God
I know you are busy and
Have so much to do
I have just one request
I want to ask of you
I have a little brother
He's only three years old
He's hurting and he's sick
Thats what I've been told
Dear God
Please heal my brother
Don't let him die
It's hard to watch Mommy
Hold him and cry
The doctor came this morning
He looked real sad
I couldn't hear what he told Mommy
But I know it was bad
Dear God
Send an angel to watch over
Him, please I pray
I hope you have time to listen
To what I have to say
Tears fall down, I just can't
Seem to understand
Please heal my little brother
Reach down and hold his hand...
sad write, but shows the innocence of a child who is only concerned for her little brother who is sick! wonderful emotions and feelings! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :(
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
What a beautiful prayer straight from your heart! I know that God will hear you and will answer. ~Joseph
Yes Linda Mae, you write from your heart. You write so well when using your empathic skills. This poem has meaning and depth. Freedom is relative. Remember. Do you know the Serenity Prayer. "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, and to change the things I can?" A meaningful and deep prayer. So in the child who is dying above and in our own lives; we have a lot of accepting to do. Love you for your faith and your deliverance. This is who I know and who I care for. Good for you ! Angel of many!
this was so beautifully sad and heartwrenching awesome job on this one and people wonder why you are an angel of caring this poem definitly proves that
Superb write ...
This so sad, it can make a bull bear cry
I love reading your assortment of wonderful writes
William
William
God Bless You
Love
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tony
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