On my days of sorrow I love to write
It heals my soul on the darkness of night
It cleanses my spirit and makes me whole
A feeling so invigorating that my body loses control
My mind travels beyond my mere existence
My peripheral boundaries have expanded beyond the norm
I feel transported to a place where I'm needed
As the fallacies of my life are slowly depleted
To you, there merely words on a paper
To me, they mean so much more
Because it's a script of my life
as I explain to myself what I most truly adore
Some see black and white, but I see a hidden message
Deeper than any abyss and longer than any passage
Words that cry to me from the page
Are an expression of my secluded rage
I hope they come to understand
That my life is not so bland
Painting words on paper is my poetries desire
Because it cleanses my spirit and takes me higher
grand write, linda and jimmy! you two make a wonderful team! :) (((HUGS))) and love to you both! your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Linda & Jimmy this is Fantastic and Beautiful! You two make a very good team and I am looking forward to more by you both together! :O)
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
This is wonderful, please continue to write together you make a great team, seamless in it's beauty and continuity.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
It was an honor to write with such
a talented man. I am the one who
THANKS you. Our poem speaks for
itself, my friend.
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Grand write, for sure..
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Great Job, Linda & Jimmy!
tony
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Very good work. Reads like Linda writes. Jimmy must have followed her lead? Excellent though. Bill
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Lisnda and Jimmi this was so beautiful excellent team you are.
Peggy
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Linda--It was truly my pleasure to be an instrumental part of this absolutely beautiful poem of yours. I always enjoy collaborating with such wonderful talent. You are awesome. Thanks for the time. Jim
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Wonderful! You two colaberated well to write a beautiful piece.
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Thank you for sharing it with me.
*hugs to you both*
~CJ
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
a talented man. I am the one who
THANKS you. Our poem speaks for
itself, my friend.
~~Linda~~
tony
Peggy
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