People fight and
Kill each other
Hold a grudge
Against their brother
Wives scream out in
In anger Of
The husband they took
Vows to love
Babies cry in the
Middle of the night
Mama's out partying
Until daylight
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The homeless man
No body sees
Behind a trash bin
On his knees
Nothing to eat
His body sore
Waiting to die
He can't take anymore
The world dealt him
A bad hand
Not one person
Who understands
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Teenage girl
So all alone
Scared and crying
She can't go home
Confused and pregnant
With a roll of the dice
Boyfriend left her
To pay the price
Mother watching by
The door
For a daughter she
Won't see anymore
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The world unseeing
As it rushes by
No body can hear
The silent cry
Of a man whos lost
All he owns
Wife and children
And modern home
Standing at a bridge
He flies through the air
The water swallows him
Does anyone care
makes one wonder, doesn't it? why can't people care for those who are hurting or in need? so sad how selfish people have become..thanks for sharing such a powerful and heartwrenching write! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. >tears <
A very heart-felt and beautifully written poem, Linda. These situations are all too common. In our hurry-up world, many are too self-engrossed to pay attention to the plight of others. But I think if I had to put my finger on the underlying cause of this apathy, it would have to be the law of supply and demand. This is an economic rule that values those things in short supply and devalues those in oversupply. Unfortunately, in our world, people are in oversupply. This has the unhappy consequence that a large number of us are marginalized, or devalued in the eyes of a large number of the rest of us. I don't see this changing for the better until population deflation finds its way into our lives.
Best regards,
Leland
This is so heartbreaking, Linda, but written with such beauty from a kind and loving heart.
Your work is so inspiring.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
Heartfelt. Sadly the world is in this shape. People do care, but for some reason people fear to help because of getting into some kind of trouble. I help when I have the opportunity, but I don't help like I use too. The world's society is more to punish an innocence helper. Like for an example, if a little girl is lost and she ask me to help her. The first thing people think and ask is, is that his or your kid, has he abducted her? What I would do is, ask the nearest woman to help this lost little girl. My word, I’ve had 3 little daughters and a son. Woman clerks would always ask me, are those your daughters? I could just feel what a new clerk was thinking. The world’s society today has a sickening abuse paranoia instilled in their brains. Most men are paranoid when around small children.
If you give a homeless person some money 90% of them will buy booze and the like. I offered a homeless person this, I’ll buy you some food, oh no! I need money! I said, you said, you needed food. He never would go for the food, so he didn’t get any money. Don’t get me wrong Linda, I do help with open arms, but I pick and choose who I help. This is a great write of yours Linda. Love & more from.............Ron
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
WEll government should care. Many of the homeless are vets! Our government especially the current regime, only cares to line their pockets with green! Excellent insightful writing.
Kudos!
Linda, this has got to be the first write on this topic that has moved me like this... and you end it with a question that all too many ask while ending their lives... so sad... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2003
Such a heartbreaking piece. You always write with such feeling.
It really is sad, Linda. And we see too much of it on the news, that's for sure. I just wish some of these people who seem to lose so much would somehow comprehend they already have it all.
When People Learn To Care About Others More Than Themselves, Maybe Then Somebody Will Care For All Of Us,i.e. (God)_
Linda, Can Ya Believe How Fast Ya Git Ta Meet Greet (God),i.e. Blink Your Eye's_
Ya Will Be Standing DIRECTLY In Front Of Him(GOD)!!!
TRASK
Best regards,
Leland
You teach people to care by shining your light where it is needed most.
That's you.
John
Good peom straight from the heart!!
Love tinka
Your work is so inspiring.
Jill :)
If you give a homeless person some money 90% of them will buy booze and the like. I offered a homeless person this, I’ll buy you some food, oh no! I need money! I said, you said, you needed food. He never would go for the food, so he didn’t get any money. Don’t get me wrong Linda, I do help with open arms, but I pick and choose who I help. This is a great write of yours Linda. Love & more from.............Ron
Kudos!
Tony:)
In Spirit,
Bear
~Joseph
Jack